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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Anandchitra, Mar 13, 2008.

  1. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    The sight of a baby's smile
    The smell of a baby's face
    The sound of a baby's cry
    I searched there for you MyGod

    The sound of birds chirping
    The sight of flowers blooming
    The smell of rain falling on soil
    I searched there for you MyGod

    The sound of waves splashing
    The smell of the salty breeze
    The sight of the huge waves
    I searched there for you MyGod

    The sight of brids migrating far
    The sound of them calling each other
    The smell of all creatures far and near
    I searched there for you MyGod

    The sight of a full moon coming
    The sound of puja in the evening
    The smell of camphor and incense
    I searched there for you MyGod

    The sight of not finding you anywhere
    The sound of my loud sigh of disappointment
    The smell of my tears falling down my cheeks
    I searched there for you MyGod

    You did not have to look out at the world
    You did not have to smell all through the wild
    You did not have to hear all the noise out loud
    All you had to do was look within and behold!
     
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  2. Meenaneelakantan

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    Dear AC ma'am

    You are rocking!! Another great piece from an emerging great poet of IL!!... Bow:bowdown

    Love
    Meena
     
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    Dear AC,
    with sight, smell and sound, you got the message out---seeing the Lord within....:bowdownto your talent and also for the message....

    sriniketan
     
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    Dear Anandchitra,

    I really enjoyed reading it. Very well written.

    Regards,

    Devika
     
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    AC,

    Good one yaar. God definitely plays hide and seek. it is upto us to find him within us and in everything he created.
     
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    Dear Akka,

    That is real great one, with realisation and message....

    Great.... Keep posting more....

    Veda
     
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    Thanks my young friends..you can tell i feel encouraged by all your words..
     
  8. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear most Chithu sis,

    Wonderfully sketched creation !! A creation to make the Almighty proud of his creation !!! :):)

    Should I say, here too I will scribble my amateur thoughts ?? But could not resist taking the back seat !! Thank you very much for making me "think" my lovely sis !!!!

    "THE CREATOR OF ALL CREATIONS"

    The best democrat this world has ever encountered,
    An affable source always by our side,
    The master engineering structure astounding us,
    The basic feature of all strong emotions !!

    The personification of righteousness,
    The Ultimate truth,
    Our reliable most soul mate,
    The destiny !!

    The dew drops speaks your purity,
    The petals speaks your orientation,
    The envelopes speaks your striking vividness,
    The blossom of a plant speaks your marvel handworks !!

    Through an infant's yawn, you rest,
    Through a child's play, you score,
    Through a butterfly's movement, you move,
    Through a bird's dart, you soar high !!

    Through the inanimate, you express,
    Through the animate, you experience,
    Through the limitless blue, you speak,
    Through the expanding brown, you teach !!

    The "air" around is your permeating nature,
    The "water" bodies reveals your extra pure nature,
    The "land" widespread stress on your enduring load bearing nature,
    The "space" around is your omniscience,
    The "fire" lit shows your raging absorption !!

    O the mighty Lord,
    You have spread your wings so wide
    Your spirit enervate our spirits too,
    when we bask in your paradise of bliss
    making me wonder why?
    we still seek you, thinking you hide !!!

    Regards with Love
    RamyaVaradharajan

     

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