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hello little angel.....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sathya, Oct 25, 2007.

  1. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello little angel......

    the lullaby i sing
    little one
    doesnt ring...

    when i learnt those numbers
    to tingle softs....
    i plannned you come later...

    and so little one
    hear your dear momma sing
    its work and play
    with you and me...

    i can write a soft for the moon
    get it on your cute horison
    in a tiny monitor...
    the moon can even sing
    my grandmothers famous lullabies....

    but i have to be away little one
    while someone care for you.......
    and thats called career love

    your nappies fresh
    the bottles all filled
    oh what do i do
    with those dripping tops?

    my heart keeps a singing
    and longing with love
    i chose it wrong ?
    the software ...
    does it belong..?

    your rosy cheeks
    your dimpled chin
    makes me want to
    live within......

    the career time limit
    a life time
    your gurgles and soft turns...
    yours hurts and wails
    your crawling step trails
    do i long to be with you....

    my heart is trying to forget
    a cute little picture
    your smile when you
    drink moma's milk
    a little dripping down your cheeks...
    and twinkling eyes...
    and get on with my soft programme...

    dear dear little one
    understand?
    my plight
    to be with you
    for you and you alone...?


    sathya

    my sister sunkan asked me to pen a poem but does it rhyme.?..no...i hope at least it rings in your heart....

    athya
     
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  2. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    hey sathya,
    that was a fast one, may be u should have taken sometime if you felt u have not done justice sometime the message is conveyed..dont worry akka
     
  3. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello akka

    whats doesnt come fast
    doesnt come at all...

    sathya
     
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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi satya,

    dont worry about the rhyming...the message is very clear and hitting at the heart....
     
  5. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow those wordings are so touching great work Sathya. It is so simple and so meaningful. Understand my plight to be with u and you alone. great ya and even the mother's milk one great. The whole poem is marvellous. God Bless such lovly poets
     
  6. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello shanthi


    pidithatho kavithai
    kavithaayinikku...

    sathya
     
  7. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello aruna

    glad you liked my `poem'
    i know
    send HIM over...
    will be glad to meet HIM
    ...haha a god
    right from cairo to india
    to bless feeling poets...
    and tell him he will have
    quite a few to bless....!

    sathya
     
  8. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hahahahaha that will be great if only I could wake them and send them to u. As u find only mummy's here then God's who are sleeping from last 5000yrs. And I am sure they will wake up........... hearing the poems of such lovly poets in our Indus ladies forum


     
  9. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello aruna


    thanks
    those thousand years
    are enough sleep
    wake up
    dear mummies...
    get a wand from dear god
    and go about blessing...
    and start from cairo aruna...
    ahaha

    sathya
     
  10. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    nice poem Sathya, message conveyed is fully understood, the plight of the working mothers portrayed well.

    sriniketan
     

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