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Heart crash 3

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by jeya04, May 17, 2010.

  1. jeya04

    jeya04 Senior IL'ite

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    Karen was on her way to the centre ...................
    "Karen.........Karen wait", shouted Alex from a distance and ran towards her.
    "I never thought............. once again we will meet ..........so earlier",said Alex and took a deep breath.
    "yeah.....duh",said Karen plainly and started walking and stoped infront of the centre.
    "Why you stopped here?",asked Alex.
    "What?",said Karen and opened the door and went inside.
    "Wa..wa..wait, what are you doing here"
    Karen looked at him and said "Iam supposed to ask this question.
    Alex was puzzeled ,"Iam not sure .......what you are talking about?"
    Karen laughed and said,"Me either......!"
    "Karen do you've any problem.....are you here for........"
    "Alex? I work here.....clear"
    "In a counselling centre?",asked Alex.
    "Iam sure you are not here for counselling",smiled Karen.
    "Yeah"and he looked Karen and changed,"No.... no....I've been here for an advice".
    "Nah...I am not gonna believe this"
    "Come on.....believe me"
    Karen raised her eyebrow and said "Okay.......come inside",she went inside and placed her bag on the table and sat on the chair with her finger crossed and said ,"Have your seat"
    Alex started casually, "You already know me as a good friend"
    "A good friend ?", laughed Karen.
    "Okay what ever for you"
    "Your problem? remember you said..... that..... you actually came here for an advise"
    "Yeah I just came here for......you know...I just.."
    "Starting trouble"
    "Exactly",laughed Alex.
    "Any girls problem?"
    "Yes...."
    "Well its seems you have a big fight with your wife"
    Alex gasped and raised his voice and said "What ?...... I am unmarried"
    "Oh I am sorry......really...I am so sorry"
    "Its okay"
    "Hmm.....well its seems you fallen in love with someone.........right"
    "Yeah ...you are absolutely right",laughed Alex and said asked ,"Then....."
    "Then?......How come I know the rest of the things"
    "Okay..... hmm actually she is very very beautiful,I was awstruck by her beauty.... her beautiful shiny eyes ,her thick black lush of hair. I am not sure wheather she is intrested in me......I dont know how to ask her out"
    "Okay do you know anthing about her so deeply ..............I mean her likings................and..."
    "Hmm .....I dont know that much about her, once I met her in the shopping mall"
    "Wow instant love.........anything else you know about her"
    "She works as a counsellor and her name is Karen"
    Karen was not so shocked to hear him but somewhat.
    "Be serious Alex"
    "I am serious Karen I am in love with you"
    "Alex.....please stop it"
    "look Karen the first time when I saw you in the mall .....I felt like soaring.....soaring higher,I've decided that you are mine and I am yours"
    Karen couldnt tolerate him,she shouted,"Stop it Alex ...please stop it"
    "Karen I love you"
    "No more words.........out I said out",yelled Karen and stood up.
    Alex got up and went near so..... so closely to Karen,which made her to loose her balance ,so she got hold of bookshelf.He dragged her so closely and he buried his hand on her thick lush hair and kissed on her rosy red lips.His lips driving hers and he forced for her response.
    Yep he got one too she lifted her knee forcefully and jabbed it towards his groin and he twisted blocking her . He dint realise untill it was all over and his back was flat on the floor.She stood over him, her fist clenching ,her eyes blazing and her chest heaving.
    "You want to kiss me mister? you ask ,you dont grab, you dont take, you dont make a sudden move , that might frighten me,got it?"
    He rose to his feet and said ,"Got it" and moved in close again.
    "Miss Karen I want to kiss you",said Alex.
    Her breath left her in a rush,he asked her "you do?"and touched her neck gently and moved it to her chin, which made her heart tilting dangerously in her chest. She raised her hand and placed over his chest and as a sudden move she pushed him and said"No no.....I dont, please can you leave this place",said Karen and turned aside and then after few minutes she turned her head back to see his reaction and she laughed slowly bitting her lower lip. But she could heard only the sound of the banged door.
    That day in the counselling centre the thought about Alex drived her crazy,she tried not to think about him but she couldnt.So she left the centre so early.
    "Karen?you are so early......its only two pm now",shocked Eric.
    "So what?"
    "Oh",said Eric and gave an oh my gash expression.
    "Are you uncomfortable in my presence?"
    "No no...not at all"
    "Even if you said yes Iam not gonna care about that"
    Eric gave her a fake and silly smile.
    Then Karen removed her coat and sat on the couch keeping her leg crossed and gave him a disgusted look.Eric watched her from the dinning room and banged his head against the wall for many times.
    Just then the door bell ranged Eric rushed to the door like a wind,(Oopse) before that Karen opened the door and she couldnt believe her eyes...it was the horse faced guy whom she saw in the cafe with Eric.
    "You?........do I know you?"
    "Oh Karen!.......it's my friend.....come inside pal",said Eric with an unclear throat.
    Karen watched Eric's hidding eyes carefuly.
    "If you dont mind Karen we are going upstairs?",said Eric and pushed him.
    "No ,I do mind"
    "Why?"
    "Me and your..... pal dint get introduced with each other"
    "Oh....yeah,Karen he is my friend Carl and she is my sister in law Karen "
    "That's all?",asked Carl.
    "Oh so .....nice to meet you Carl,You are so handsome",said Karen with a gorgeous look.
    "Eric you havent said anything about your sister in law,She in fine"
    "Carl ...you know what? you obviously look like Hugh grant",and she thought inside,"If Hugh grant heard this he would hang up"
    "But Karen I couldnt use any of the hollywood beauties over you because you are even more beautiful than them", said Carl.
    "Thank you so much Carl ,this is the best compliment I've ever heard",said Karen and looked Eric to see his reaction.
    "Hey .......okay guys ......stop it please stop it"
    "Karen you can get my phone number from Eric Okay....You can call me"
    Eric pushed him to the upstairs so hardly.Karen watched them going inside , she murmured ,"Gee...something fishy!"
    A couple of days later..........
    Karen was coming outside of the centre.Just then she saw Alex standing on the opposite side of the road .As a sign of ignoring him she startd walking straitly,he also went behind her,she just turned back and saw him,
    "What do you want from me?"
    Alex went closer and took her hand and said,"Look at my eyes Karen..... just look at my eyes and tell not to come here after ,then I wont?"
    Karen looked his eyes so deeply and she felt the magic................
    TO BE CONT...............
     
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    pgraman Gold IL'ite

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    jeya very nice love story dear. very romantic and humerus.
    keep going dear.......enna romba fluent ah irkka enaku koncham puriyarathu kastamaa irukku.
     
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    jeya04 Senior IL'ite

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    Thank you very much rams
    enakkum rendu varushathukku munadi english suthama varadhu, niraya eng movies, books pathapiragu thaana vandhurichhu, edhu periya vishiyame kidayadhu, inoru vishiyam indha kadhai eludhuradhukku munadi naanum kadhai eludhuren pervali nu kandraviya yarum padikakuda mudiyadha alavukku neraya kadha eludhiruken.
     
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    palasa nenaikaatha now you are writting very well good flow........aamaa antha english epdi pazhakuna apdingra vishayathth mattum.........enakkum teach and give
     
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    jeya04 Senior IL'ite

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    Very simple summa irukkum podhellam dictionaryah eduthu padikanum differenta na english wordsoda meaninga theringikanum. then subtitlesoda english padam neraiya pakkanum.
     
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    oh thank you very much dear.........naa summa ve irukka maatten......so naa ithukkunu thaniyaa time othukkikiren......apram poem thread pakkamum koncham vaa......
     
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    jeya04 Senior IL'ite

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    definitely dear
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Jeyanthi
    Hmmmm.............It is getting more interesting.
    Looks like karen found someone...........
     
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    May be..........
     
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    Going well baby!!!!!!!!!
    Will be eagerly waiting tomo to see yours!!!!
     

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