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Ghosts of the royal family

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Catgol, Aug 25, 2014.

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  1. Nov 8, 2014 #511
    Catgol

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    Thanks for your suggestion dear Padmaja will definetly give it a thought .. Iam writing a second story called dolls its a phychological thriller and completely different from ghosts of the royal family .please read it and share your thoughts
     
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  2. Nov 8, 2014 #512
    Bestmom

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    Dear Catgol,
    Such a nice story with lots of information abt exorcism. .actually I liked first ending part..
    as it is the punishment given to their whole family.
    Anyway happy ending also good to see..
    all the best for your next story..waiting eagerly
    regards
    Bestmom
     
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  3. Nov 10, 2014 #513
    YoginiVenkat

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    Hi Catgol u have posted your second story??
     
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  4. Nov 10, 2014 #514
    Catgol

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    Yes yogini it's called " The dolls " you can read it in the stories ( fiction ) thread
     
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  5. Nov 10, 2014 #515
    kavithamadhan

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    Hi Catgol,

    wonderful. congrats for the great work you have done. I daily open your story first after coming to net :).

    you have said that uncle will come in the final episode which was missing.... I would like you to open a sequel ... as we were very much interested in this story.

    thanks for giving us a great story ... interesting throughout every episode is worth reading..:cool2:
     
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  6. Nov 10, 2014 #516
    Catgol

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    Dear Kavitha will definetly write a prequel or a sequel after completing the second story called "the dolls" ..

    Next time will try to give a better plot with greater significance given to uncle 's character .. Writing ghosts of the royal family was little mentally exhausting as I had to pen down deeper details involved in the story which left me with committing a few mistakes here and there ., i apologise my readers for it

    i find writing dolls a little refreshing it's like a little break from the ghosts of the royal family so I can come up with a better prequel or a sequel to the ghosts of the royal family
     
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  7. Nov 10, 2014 #517
    Madhumidha

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    Nice and happy ending, Catgol!!!
    Also special thanks for writing the second story also !!!
     
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    Catgol

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    Ah thank you Madhumuidha .. Do read " the dolls " and give your comments
     
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  9. Nov 11, 2014 #519
    raji2678

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    Very nice of you catgol to change the ending to a happy one. Remeber, Indian ghosts always lose..its is the hollywood ones which win in the end, as I feel that Indains are more spiritual.

    You will shine as a great writer. All the best.
     
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    Catgol

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    Yes raji :).... Thank you for your comments and wishes ..
     
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