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Ghosts of the royal family

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Catgol, Aug 25, 2014.

  1. periamma

    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    catgol happy ending.you are a born writer .considering reader's view is the best quality.wish you a bright future and May God bless you all.
     
  2. Jackrose

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    This is one of the best horror stories I've ever read. :hatsoff to your style of narration Catgol. Eagerly waiting to read your next story:).
     
  3. Catgol

    Catgol Platinum IL'ite

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    Thank you jack rose , best mom , periamma
     
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    Thank you very much periamma
     
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    Hi Catlog,

    Ending is nice:2thumbsup::clap, Am one of the fan for your story...:hatsoff Expecting another ghost story from you soon.:)
     
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    Thank you gayathri iam humbled
     
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    Thank you very much periamma right from the beginning you have constantly supported Me and motivated me ..
     
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    Hi Catgol, I have never commented before; but i was waiting for the finale so eagerly.. I liked both the endings though the first one was a lil sad.

    You should write more... All the very best and GOD bless you!!
     
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    Nice one...Awaiting to read this story published in book...
     
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    catgol congratulations on successfully writing an interesting story. you got many fans through this story :)
    now you expressed a desire to write a sequel to this. may i suggest one thing though? why dont you write a prequel to this instead of sequel. many readers wanted the role of uncle to be extended and made clear.
    so can you write his story from his birth, like what problems he faced while growing up. why he got such a rare disease and how he tackled it? you can also insert a love story from his youth, and how did it turn when she came to know about his condition.
    you can bring this to conclusion with the present story.
    this is just a suggestion from my side. thanks :)
     
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