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Ghosts of the royal family

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Catgol, Aug 25, 2014.

  1. kavithamadhan

    kavithamadhan Silver IL'ite

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    very nice story and interesting too. waiting for the next.
    a small suggestion please take care of punctuation marks which will help us..
    Anyway the story is awesome.
     
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  2. Rajeni

    Rajeni Moderator Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Catgol,

    Nice going. I really feel that you have a very strong plot and thats why I cant stop myself from giving this feedback. I feel like the story is being rushed a little. It would add more glam if you are more elaborate.
    I dont want to interfere in your writing style, its just my personal opinion. :)

    But the content is really gripping and entertaining! keep writing.. We are waiting!!
     
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  3. raji2678

    raji2678 Gold IL'ite

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    A very nice story.I am sure if written as a book / movie you will make mega bucks
     
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  4. Catgol

    Catgol Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear friends thank you all for your positive reviews yes I ll correct my punctuation marks and try to elaborate the story ..thanks Raji , madhumitha ,rajeni, kavithamahadevan , minjagan and all other friends who have commented ..Raji iam really flattered thanks for your comment
     
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  5. periamma

    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice going.Poor Priya she is suffering because of her dear and near one
     
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  6. Catgol

    Catgol Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks periamma
     
  7. kavithamadhan

    kavithamadhan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Catgol I am Kavithamadhan not mahadevan :-D.

    yesterday I went home by car with my husband, he parked the car and went for some work... your story came to my mind suddenly ... and I was like :eek.....

    eagerly waiting for your next episode.
     
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  8. gayathri123

    gayathri123 Senior IL'ite

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    Hi catgol,

    Story was awesome and ur narration was too good...eagerly waiting for next part...
     
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  9. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hmmm along with the young girl there is a woman too......
    Interesting...........Hope you will add the story fast along with the story suspense you to don't create suspense ok....no patience you see:biggrin2:
     
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  10. Catgol

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    Dear friends sorry for the delay please bear with me I have come to attend the tenth day function of my grand mother death .. Will post very soon
     

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