1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

Ghosts of the Boeing A386

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Catgol, Feb 21, 2015.

  1. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    12,595
    Likes Received:
    2,786
    Trophy Points:
    445
    Gender:
    Female
    Lovely story...

    I am too late, I can see you have already started a new one. Let me start reading that and be up to date.

    You write on any topic, as long as it is written by you. Your writing his awesome.
     
    1 person likes this.
  2. Catgol

    Catgol Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,000
    Likes Received:
    1,353
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    Thank you very much arunarc
     
  3. surekhap

    surekhap Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,274
    Likes Received:
    1,040
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    very nice story and very nice narration. I felt all the charecters. I felt as i was watching a horrer movie. Every scene is infront of my eyes. please come back with another one. I will be especially waiting for your next one.:2thumbsup:
     
  4. nivsrini

    nivsrini Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    221
    Likes Received:
    82
    Trophy Points:
    68
    Gender:
    Female
    Good Story Catgol. Nice ending too. @ Suma, How is your pregnency going? Which month are you in now? Happy Pregnency :thumbsup
     
  5. SajidShaikh

    SajidShaikh New IL'ite

    Messages:
    5
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    1
    Gender:
    Male
    Hello Catgol,

    I have been reading your stories from past few days and I would like to tell you that you are an amazing writer. You have a very good knowledge and I love the way you mix love, horror and mythology together.
    Just one complaint though :|. I found lots of grammatical mistakes and sentence construction which sometimes made me read the episodes twice to understand. Also, many times you mixed up the names of Ravi and Raj. Otherwise your narration is quite perfect :). I actually felt that I am a part of the story and everything is happening in front of me :thankyou2:
    Currently I am reading your another writing "The Haunted Inn" and eagerly waiting for the next episode.
     
  6. peddadas

    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,268
    Likes Received:
    829
    Trophy Points:
    208
    Gender:
    Female
    Hi Catgol,
    I happened to bump into this thread. This was such a wonderful narration. Thanks for giving us a story. I would like to advice you (if you don't mind) to continue writing atleast one episode per week. I will expect s come back.
    Thanks once again for the story.
    PS
     
  7. Sweetynila

    Sweetynila Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    483
    Likes Received:
    43
    Trophy Points:
    50
    Gender:
    Female
    Hi Catgol,

    Very nice story. The way you narrate the story is really very nice.
     

Share This Page