1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

Galatta Marriage- short comedy serial part 2

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Tamildownunder, Aug 17, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Part 2:

    Sankaran: Till Vanaja joins why not Suresh entertain us with some songs.

    Lakshmi: We have kept a music teacher and taught him carnatic music. His teacher is the desciple of M.D. Ramanathan who was the desciple of Tiger Vardachariyar. His teacher Krishnamoorthy Bhagavathar used to say that Suresh is singing like Tiger himself. (She smiles proudly).

    Sankaran: Oh! is it true? Come on, Suresh give us some good sangathi.

    Suresh: Actually I can't sing without accompanying instruments. Anyway, I will sing. He sings
    'Varaveena mrithupaani
    vanaruka lochana rani
    suruchira pampara veni
    suranutha kalyani
    nirupama subaguna lOlaa
    nirata jayaaprada sheelaa
    varadaapriya ranganaayaki
    vaancita pala daayaki
    saraseejaasana jananee
    jaya jaya jaya'

    Sankaran to Lakshmi: You told that Suresh will sing like Tiger himself, but he is singing like reciting nursery rhymes. Ha ha ha (he laughs)

    Lakshmi: Actually Suresh had a sour throat. But, in order to respect your request he sang that is all. What is wrong with Varavenna song? It is in praise of Devi. Sankaran apologises to Lakshmi.

    Just then, Veena brings Vanaja who is clad in silk saree and has her hair well braided and a nice pottu on the forehead.

    Sankaran to Veena: Where is Vanaja? who is this girl? from next doors?

    Veena: This is Vanaja. Open your eyes widely and see.

    Sankaran: Oh! My God!. Having seen Vanaja always in pant and shirt, I am not able to recognize my own daughter (laughs loudly). Amma Vanaja, when you were grtting dressed, Suresh entertained us with songs.

    Vanaja: Oh, lovely!. Suresh do you dance as well? We can go to Sun TV's 'Perfect Couple' program.

    Sankaran: 'Adiye enkarathuku aambadayanai kanom, pilaai per kichami nu sonnalam'. Vanaja, still it is not decided about your marriage and you are talking of 'Perfect Couple' program.

    Vanaja: So what dad? I like Suresh and I am going to marry him. If you don't agree we will have 'Washingtonil Thirumanam' (marriage in Washington).

    Suresh: Thank you, Vanaja. I will be like the lamb of 'Mary had a little lamb' poem. You know wherever Mary goes the lamb is sure to go behind her. Ha ha ha..... (he laughs uncontrollably).

    Sankaran to Gopalan: Did you see that both of them have decided themselves to get married. If we want to save our respect we have to perform the marriage immeditely.

    Gopalan: I fully agree with you and let us start the preparations.

    Vanaja: Uncle, before marriage I want to take Suresh out to disco with me. Do you have any objection?

    Sankaran: Why Vanaja to disco? so that later he can dance to your tunes? Ha ha ha.. (He laughs loudly).

    To be continued......

    Part 3 is here
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Aug 21, 2007
    Loading...

  2. Mythraeyi

    Mythraeyi Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    800
    Likes Received:
    47
    Trophy Points:
    63
    Gender:
    Female
    This is really a fun read!:-D
     
  3. aishu22

    aishu22 Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    2,598
    Likes Received:
    110
    Trophy Points:
    160
    Gender:
    Female
    DearTDU,
    Read both parts of the comedy serial. Your narration is very vivid and gives me a feel as though im watching the serial.

    Great go! Keep Rocking!
     
  4. slp807

    slp807 Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    501
    Likes Received:
    2
    Trophy Points:
    33
    Gender:
    Female
    Dear TDU sir,

    read 2 parts at a go, the narration is very very good and eagerly waiting for your next part. :2thumbsup:

    cheers
    sreelatha
     
  5. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    4,124
    Likes Received:
    234
    Trophy Points:
    153
    Gender:
    Female
    Dear TDU,
    is your origin tirunelveli, only there they always have a vachanam as reference the way you have mentioned here...moving very fast...and nice read..sunkan
     
  6. Sindhuja

    Sindhuja Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,104
    Likes Received:
    19
    Trophy Points:
    68
    Gender:
    Female
    TDU sir,
    Enjoyed part 2, too!


    regards,
     
  7. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Dear Mythraeyi, Aishu, sreelatha, sunkan, ans Sindhuja,

    Thanks to all of you for posting your comments which I cherish.

    Sunkan - How correctly you found out that my poorveeham is Thirunelveli! My native place is Narasinga Naloor near Suthamalli near Pettai near thirunelveli Town.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  8. madhu11

    madhu11 Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    569
    Likes Received:
    11
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Female
    TDU Sir,

    Enjoyed part 2 also. I hope u post more like these. :2thumbsup:
     
  9. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Thanks, madhu. Yes, I will try to post some comedies. I enjoy reading as well as writting comedies which energises me.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  10. honeybee

    honeybee Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    583
    Likes Received:
    186
    Trophy Points:
    108
    Gender:
    Female
    TDU sir
    Enjoyed your comedy serial (part 1 & 2) and eagerly waiting for the remaining episodes too. :2thumbsup:

    Regards
    Honeybee
     

Share This Page