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From womb with Love !

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Mar 20, 2009.

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  1. Mar 26, 2009 #41
    Chitvish

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    All that I can say is, you have brought out pathos at its literary best!
    Love,
    Chithra.
     
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  2. Mar 26, 2009 #42
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Aruna,

    Good to see you here Pothi:))

    I have always wanted to write about the foetus and just got involved in the subject. Glad to know you enjoyed the blog.

    Your presence here feels great.

    Love,
    Devika
     
    Devika Menon, Mar 26, 2009
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  3. Mar 26, 2009 #43
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Swathi,

    Thankyou so much for the comments. I do feel really motivated to pen some more reading your remarks. Thankyou so very much for stepping in.

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    Devika Menon

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    Dear Dear Ma'am,

    This truly is the icing on the cake. Loved your comment on it and glad you think so.

    As a mother , I have often communicated to my child even before birth sense a reaction to my communication from within me. Its pure bliss.... preparing one for motherhood.

    Love,
    Your Mol
     
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  5. Mar 26, 2009 #45
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    Devika,

    Its really amazing..and quite touching too...

    Now that I am pregnant,I feel it more as if some real baby is saying all this to his mom..

    Good work...
     
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    Devika Menon

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    Dear Anshu,

    Im so glad to have you visit my blog:) Thankyou.
    I can completely relate to your feelings at this point.

    I wish you a very healthy pregnancy and a safe delivery dear friend.May you be blessed with a beautiful bonny baby.:))))))

    Love,
    Devika
     
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  7. Mar 26, 2009 #47
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    My dear Devikutty,

    Wonderful to see the Bard of IL once again with a masterpiece blessed by her Muse. This one is a solitaire , and the most precious amongst them all .The sheer brilliance is dazzling to say the least!
    What a beautiful concept so artistically crafted with powerful imagery! The tragedy of a woman betrayed and wronged is well conveyed through the little unborn one who yearns to come forward and protect his dear mother.
    These lines really make a lump rise in one's throat...

    "Living in your sorrowful womb now I feel,
    When I am out I promise to help you heal.

    I can’t bear to feel your agony,
    My tiny hands beg you to have faith in me.."

    The pathetic state of helplessness, striving to project bravado..... a picture of an an innocent mind in torment leaves a lasting impact......

    The best and most welcome part is undoubtedly the very happy and jubilant conclusion......thank you dear ....for bringing the happy smiles out soon ( I was thinking to myself as I began reading....Devikutty is in tear jerker mode now !!!) so that we could rejoice at a new dawn of hope and promise of a lovely 'happily ever after' ending narrative .
    love,
    Paulina...L chechi
     
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  8. Mar 27, 2009 #48
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    Dear Devika
    Beautifully written..it really touched my heart......
     
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  9. Mar 29, 2009 #49
    Devika Menon

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    My Dear Chechi,

    Your FB infact is a masterpiece. Loved each line and loooooveeeeeee the goooooood words about me:)))))).Thats my meals for the next two days:))

    Yeah Chechi, the explosion is still echoing in my ears ,so dare I even try something with a sad or tragic ending and face your wrath?? Nahhhh Never.... So happy happy ending its gotta be...

    Thankyou so much for the comment Chechi. Love to have you grace my blogs:)))

    Love,
    Devikutty.
     
    Devika Menon, Mar 29, 2009
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    Devika Menon

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    Dear Megh,

    Thankyou so much for joining me here. Im so glad to know you enjoyed the blog.:))

    Love,
    Devika
     
    Devika Menon, Mar 29, 2009
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