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Forgiveness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pammor, Dec 27, 2007.

  1. pammor

    pammor Senior IL'ite

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    Forgivness

    Adrift in a sea of sadness
    lost in my thoughts
    Jokes can be taken so harsh
    when meant to be taken lightly

    A slip of the tongue is all it takes
    and suddenly you're alone
    boxed in a world of fears
    a world of tears

    Cruelty is it's game
    life it's name
    ever changing, rapidly sweeping you along
    like a roller coaster you can't stop
    and as you spin wildly spin
    out of control
    scenes from earlier on this ride of life
    flash through your mind

    The walls are closing in
    The room begins to spin
    you fall to your knees and
    beg for it to stop
    you beg and plead for
    forgiveness knowing
    that you were wrong

    You've been to bossy,
    said too much,
    you say it will never happen
    again and you know
    that you'll do anything
    in your power to keep it
    from happening again
    you love these people
    and can't fight
    like this with them
    so you plead for forgiveness.
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow! Nice words those and I have a question - do we seek forgiveness, just because we want them around us and not really for being sorry? And the answer at times, alas, is "YES". Thanks Pammor and sorry for the long delay in responding to this. Thanks to Aruna too. -rgs
     
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    Pallavi4me Platinum IL'ite

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    it seems to be true words from the heart.. very touching
     
  4. ramyaraja

    ramyaraja Gold IL'ite

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    So simple words yet very powerful thoughts... Wonderfully chosen words pammor....
     
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