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Forbidden Love...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, May 2, 2016.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    A story untold.
    Forbidden was their love…
    united were two souls.
    Secrets they held..
    closing the doors to the world.
    Whispers in the night sky...
    kisses in the moonlight...
    dreams in their eyes…
    they lived in a fantasy world.
    Short was their time..
    dancing to the sounds of wind chimes.
    Love grew far like a creeper,
    Never to unwind.
    Hated by all,disowned by family…
    they were punished to death…
    In love they were until their last breathe.

    Ashes of their body were strewn in the lake…
    an end brought upon by fate…
    joined in water now they flow…
    to a place no one else can go.
     
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  2. Amica

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    You've written such a beautiful and poignant poem! Thank you, @Scorpio707! :)
     
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    Hi Meenu
    A very sad one but still nice writing. Beautiful lines. Wish there was a happy ending n this world
    Thanks
     
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    @Scorpio707 lovely lyric, chiming like the wind chime of love forbidden, and washed away from the world, to create new ripples or even waves!!!
     
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    Thank you Amica, happy that you found it good :):thumbsup: .
     
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    Hi Laks,

    Yeah I gave it a sad ending, next one would make a happy happy one :):thumbsup: . Thank you.
     
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    Thank you. Glad you liked it :).
     
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    Hi Meenu : )
    Your poetry reminds me Ek duje ke liye movie. Physically they were away from each other but their souls were united. Nice one.
     
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    Awesome lines scropio707 :clap2::clap2::clap2:
     
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    Hi Latha:),

    Yes that was a tragic movie. Sad endings make up for some great stories that can never be forgotten, like Titanic :). Glad you liked my poem. Thank you.
     
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