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Feelings...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by subbutr, Sep 14, 2007.

  1. subbutr

    subbutr Senior IL'ite

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    The air we breathe cannot be seen
    And yet it fills our breasts
    The stars so high we cannot touch
    But we admire them never the less

    The depth of the world is oh so shallow
    For we judge only what is in sight
    If we close our eyes and open our minds
    It will be revealed that night is day and day is night

    Nothing is what it seems
    If you trust in only with your eyes
    Open your heart and release the spirit
    Leave behind the tears and cries

    True joy can only found
    If you take the time to look deep within
    The outer appearance is only a shell
    While the truth is under the skin

    Distance in fact is many miles
    It is far if that is what you see
    But if you look with your heart and not the eyes
    I'm as close to you as you are to me

    Subbu
     
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  2. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Subbu,

    Good Poem....

    This reminds me what I tell my wife..... I love u so much... But unfortunately I am not anchaneya to tear my heart and show you ....

    But she will wait for her turn and give me back right royally.... that is a differnt story...

    Veda
     
  3. subbutr

    subbutr Senior IL'ite

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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    DEar subbusir,

    Nice poem about feelings...visuals...I always feel you see only what you want to see...not what is seen...............so the moment you are clear you see things for what they are :2thumbsup:
     
  5. subbutr

    subbutr Senior IL'ite

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    Thank you dear shanvy ( shanthi ) for the kind gestures and hope to see some articles from your desk.

    Remember always
    :

    "Good looks catch the eye but a GOOD personality catches the heart. You're blessed with both!"

    Subbu
     
  6. Sindhuja

    Sindhuja Silver IL'ite

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    Subbu sir,
    Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

    I liked this particular stanza (quoted down) very much.

    "True joy can only found
    If you take the time to look deep within
    The outer appearance is only a shell
    While the truth is under the skin"


    regards,
     
  7. subbutr

    subbutr Senior IL'ite

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    Thank you dear Sindhuja for the encouraging words...

    Feelings are the outcome of our emotional acts.

    It's like a continous cycle of

    "Thoughts lead on to purposes;
    Purposes go forth in action;
    Actions form habits;
    Habits decide character;
    And
    Character fixes our destiny. "


    Subbu
     
  8. Shreesundaram

    Shreesundaram Silver IL'ite

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    Subbu sir,

    As per your mail we browsed allpoetry.com, I don't know how to find your poetry collections. My 12year old daughter is very much iterested in writing poemsand stories.Today she signed up and posted one poem, Her user name is "aarabi". You can check it out please give comments.

    Thank u very much,

    SHREESUNDARAM
     
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    its nice subbu!nice poem...keep on writing!

    AAMi:)
     
  10. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Subbu Sir,
    once again a nice poem with feelings. It is true that we see only the appearance and not the inner beauty just as the case in Jackfruit.
    Sriniketan
     

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