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Farewell -sequel

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Aug 13, 2018.

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    Lol, @peddadas. I will PM it to you.
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    :tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy: Very funny fb, Adharv. I am still struggling to control my giggle. Thank you, dear.:tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy::tonguecrazy:
     
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    I was thinking of asking you for writing the other side of sequel but I am not sure if it is right to do so. Everyone want to see the positive side but negative side stucked to my mind that I cannot feel the truth in positive. Your write up is too great and you cover each minute detail so nicely and effectively that anyone can visualize the scene. Simply superb.
     
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    So sorry Geetha I thought I replied. Really happy to read a happy ending. Loved all the characters. Stll one question remains unanswered. What was the blank Selfie that Lata took on rainy night about ? Enjoyed Reading
     
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    Thanks, dear m.

    When you say the negative side, do you mean the 'spirit' side /paranormal side? Why not? One can always enjoy the darker side too; in fact, the horror genre is quite popular. I have read that people who enjoy TV shows that deal with murder mysteries, paranormal kinds of stuff etc are supposed to be inquisitive and intelligent minds!
     
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    Dear HP,

    I am really happy to receive your feedback.

    I had ended the first part Farewell open-ended allowing the readers to draw their own conclusion. At that level, there was a strong possibility of concluding Chinu's death and a paranormal activity i.e, return of his spirit.

    But when I wrote the sequel saying Chinu is alive, the understanding is as under:
    The mother was tired after a long day>she desperately wanted her son to return ASAP>the inclement weather was playing a havoc on her senses>>>>>in response to the various stresses, she hallucinates i.e, she imagines seeing what she wants to see and she even takes a selfie! So it is a case of wishful thinking. The phone call from the Police station suddenly puts unexpected pressure on her>>>she succumbs to mental+physical pressures. (Vasovagal syncope (vay-zoh-VAY-gul SING-kuh-pee) occurs when you faint because your body overreacts to certain triggers, such as the sight of blood or extreme emotional distress. It may also be called neurocardiogenic syncope)

    Scientific justification: Perfectly Healthy Brains Hallucinate
    "...neuroscientist Christoph Teufel of the University of Cardiff in Wales and his colleagues, including University of Cambridge psychiatrist Paul Fletcher, show that visual hallucinations may be the result of our brains doing their best to make sense of a chaotic and ambiguous world."

    Hope I made sense.
     
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    Wow that makes total sense. Thanks for taking so much effort in providing scientific evidence for my question. Admire Your talent in cooking drawing painting writing and your knowledge in various subjects. An all rounder
     
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    Oh! Dear! Mere baal yoonhi dhoop mein safed nahi huvey hain.(I have gained experience over a period of time.:))
     
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    Effect of the company of intelligent people like you...;)
     
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