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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Dec 14, 2017.

  1. Tamrakshar

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    Agree!
     
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    Sorry to disappoint you!
     
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    a child was disciplined too much on one instant asked God for this wish .... God said Thatthaasthu and whoosshhhh .... mommy was gone. Child lives a guilty life hoping someday when he meets mommy she would forgive the child for the innocent wish. After all how can a mother not forgive.
     
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    The essence of the poem was that we tend to find fault with our parents, but never look at ourselves. Are we perfect? Didn't we make any MISTAKE?
     
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    Lakshmi, loved your comments and agree with you. :)
     
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    Nice message.
     
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    Thanks!
     
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    Sheesh ! Has happened before on this forum. Maybe have a disclaimer at the end saying these feelings/ thoughts are someone else’s, NOT MINE. Specially when it involves wishing harm to the madre or objectifying women.

     
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    Never mind. You have the poetic license to go whichever way your muse takes you. Even Picasso had a blue period. Had he been a musician, he’d have sung them blues.
     
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    But what kind of a person wishes their own parent to die? Ungrateful, narrow-minded, uncompassionate? Nobody's perfect but not everyone is this vindictive.
     
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