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  1. Aug 5, 2011 #1
    vidchakra

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    I read couple of posts from ILites who are in the midst of difficulties. This made me think "Why do we need to face difficulties in life? Why can't we always be happy?"


    A rose is a rose only when it has fragrance and thorns
    Life is complete only with joy like fragrance and problems like thorns.

    Life is a beautiful rose with problems lots
    Darkness fills the space before a new day dawns

    Failure is a stepping stone to success and put your efforts
    The steps of stone will surely lead your life to comforts

    God will give you the courage and strength to face
    Don't give up and only see the ray of light and grace

    Fear not the sorrow that the dark clouds deploys
    Rain finally brings the kind sweet joys

    Learn from your errors and mistakes
    Be careful the next time and avoid remakes

    Know your strengths and weakness
    Follow your goal and don't be aimless

    Problems and Challenges are part of Life
    Live always a hope of happiness twice

    Every cloud has a silver lining
    Pray to God for his blessing
    You will find a star bright and shining



    PS:This is the my first poem. Hope you like it.
     
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  2. Aug 5, 2011 #2
    hridhaya

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    Vidu,
    Nicely written and motivating as well. I really appreciate the concern you felt on seeing other's problems.

    I liked these 2 lines a lot

    Learn from your errors and mistakes
    Be careful the next time and avoid remakes

    Know your strengths and weakness
    Follow your goal and don't be aimless
     
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    vjbunny

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    Hi Vid,
    Hope you dont mind my frank opinion your poem has meaning but while reading it sounds more like prose...while writing poem you should leave the details but indicate it in subtle way and make sure the rhymes make sense to do this recite the poem loudly you will feel the correctness...

    Hope you dont mind my blunt review though I too am no good at poetry but wanted to share so that if possible you will master it...
     
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    forgiven10

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    Hi Vidu,

    Congratulations on your first attempt at poetry! It's a great feeling, isn't it? I am not a poet myself but I imagine the feeling is same as when one produces any first piece of creative work. I enjoyed your poem and I hope you will give us the joy of hearing more from you in the days to come!

    :)
     
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    mssunitha2001

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    Nice one vid.....motivating lines !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Hey! Vidu,
    Looks like the poetess in you is getting unleashed..great work gal!
    I simply enjoyed and cherished each word of it..keep it coming!!
    Cheers,
    Saras
     
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    vidchakra

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    Dear hridaya,
    Thanks for the encouragement :)
    Glad to know you liked it
     
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    vidchakra

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    vjbunny,
    No worries.. Keep your FB coming, positive and negative.. It gives me a chance to improve..

    Thanks for sharing the tips.. Will keep in mind the next time :)

    Hope I will improve the next time
     
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    vidchakra

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    Sophie,
    Nice to see you here :)
    Thanks gal for the encouragement.. After writing my first poem I realized that its such a difficult task. Hats off to all the great poets who have created such wonderful work
    I am still learning and hope to improve with every work..
    I get to learn a lot from you also..

    Thanks for the sweet FB
     
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    vidchakra

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    Thanks sunitha..
    As always your FB encourages me always...
    Thank you my dear friend :)
     
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