It is a completed story . I feel I have written it decently . When the knot is cleared this will be proved. But I am reluctant. There is no question to be answered. The combination of views is the centre of the story. Very very brief story.
You can post it in the stories section. Would definitely read it and give my input! Would be interesting to read! Well, don't worry about the length of the story, the content is more important than the length.