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Down the memory lane- tale of a young woman

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by malspie, Sep 4, 2007.

  1. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    "Allam Ungal Ashirwadam," I am a small fish learning to swim. A word of appreciation from a writer of your calibre has boosted my morale. "Romba Nanri Sir.'
     
  2. Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Mals,
    You are not just malspie or apple-pie, but a "chweetie-pie", as well. Your "graphic" description of the girl taking care of her sick mother, just melted me.
    The old lady was blessed - not all daughters are like Mausmi. Many are like her sister.
    You write middles (mirror-mania), you write narrations(independence day in your apartment), you write (real-life?) incidents about your (?) boss etc etc----the list is long, Mals ! Is there any area that you have not ventured into? Then go ahead & do it ! You will be a roaring success there also.
    Anushiv is justified in requesting you to write more about yourself, in your profile !:)
    Let the cat meeeeeow & come out of the bag !
    Love,
    Chits.
     
  3. Lotus007

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    Very well written, well narrated story.... seems part of autobiography.. keep it up..
     
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  4. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Chits,

    "Un Ashirwadam, yen Tunnai
    Unl Anb, yen Vayi"

    Your words of encouragement and your belief in me, makes me strive to excel. I have to do it and I will do it has become my "motto". I had pledged to exist like a vegetable, but the F.B's from members have made sit behind the wheels once again.

    I am not here for mind games, but to entertain.

    Thanks a ton, Chits, for taking time from your extreme busy schedule to read this LONG LONG post...

    Love and
     
  5. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Lotus007,

    When people identify themselves or similar incidents with the central character or her sister, you can call it an autobiography. It happens in most of the families. Thanks for the appreciation.
     
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    Hi Mals,
    You have excelled in writing this piece, so well narrated. Good Going Buddy!!!!!!!
     
  7. vaidehi

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    Hey Mals,

    Once again a very good story with an excellent and unique way of narrating it.
    i really admire ur efforts to express ur views in a very simple ,yet classy way so that it reaches the mass.

    u r proving to be a feather in IL's glowing Cap. And me being a Mumbaikar too ,very eagerly looking forward to meet you some day. How abt we arranging a IL meet up for mumbai people?

    cheers
    vaideho
     
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    Mals

    You have narrated the story so well which had a feeling that it is happening in front of us. Too good. Keep it up.

    regards
    vidhi
     
  9. malspie

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    Oh Vaidehi,

    Hope I will be able to live up to your expectations my dear friend who has always stood by me. Thanks once again.

    Were you the one who stays at Mulund??
     
  10. malspie

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    Dear Janani and Vidhi,

    Keep reading.... O.k.

    Your words of encouragement has deviated me from existing like a vegetable in the site.......................

    Thanks for the appreication.
     

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