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Dhanvyavaad Kisko Kisko Dhoon ????

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Nov 25, 2007.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi all...it was a thought process as i was thinking about the contest in IL this month....I landed up in a great confusion....so the outcome...how many of you are in the same boat as me....bonk

    Dhanyavaad kisko dhoon...

    maa kho jinhoney janm dhiya
    yah papa ko..jinki ungli pakdey
    itna badi huyee ......
    yah mere adyapak kho
    jisne mujhe likna sikhaya,
    yah mere doston kho
    mere sukh dukh key saathi
    yah mere pyar kho,
    jisne jeena sikaya...
    yah mere bachon kho...
    jo bane mere ankhon ke taare..
    aur mere mamta kho jagaya..
    yah mere bajoo ki padosan,
    mere har mushkil meY kaam aayee..
    yah mere sab rishton kho..
    jo mujhe duniya ki len den samjaya...
    yah mere doctor kho
    jisne mujhe maut se bachaya...
    yah mere kuch anjaane log..
    jo waqt waqt peh kaam aayeh.
    aur ab ban gaye pechaan ke log..
    yah mere ab key naye dost..
    jinki pyaar neh mujhe uksaaya..
    aur likney lagi mein yeh sab...
    yah us khuda koh...
    jo mujhe katputli key tarah nachakar.
    sikatha hai yehi toh hai jina...
    Wah reh bhagwan,diya hai mujhe
    sirf ek zindagi..aur ehsaan in sabka..
    duan magoon naa kam pad jaye
    yeh dhanyavaad karte karte....


    SABKO KARTI HOON DHANYAVAAD
    KARTI HOON DUA AAP SAB KELIYE
    ABAD RAHO AISEY HI SAB KHI
    DUNIYA MEIN BAHAR LAATE LAATEY:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff
     
  2. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shan,

    Nice one yaar.... No other word to explain.....
     
  3. Saraswathipv

    Saraswathipv IL Hall of Fame

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    Shanthi,

    U have a great way of putting ur thoughts..:queen. When I m confused about anything, my head will only suthufy..cannot explain.

    I know, we cannot just think of one person to whom we are thankful. The list will go on and on. In fact each and every member in our family and all those whom we have come across would have taught us something or the other...or shall I say.... voluntarily or subconsciously we learn something from everyone we meet . So just keep doing :hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff.. to everyone ..

    So for now:hatsoffto u...bye
     
  4. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow Shanthi This too coming from your heart beautiful one. You are so right it is acutally very difficult to thank one person in life as there are so many who comes on the way and does such wonderful things for us which we cannot forget them till our end.
     
  5. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi veda,

    What more to ask for...the first feedback..inspite of me not telling you that i posted here....it shows how well you keep track of my posts....thanks a ton................
     
  6. Shanvy

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    Hi saraswathi,

    when i am in confusion, i start thinking of all the probabilities of solutions...so all permutations and combinations...(my elective subject was OR and statistics...bonkbonk)

    You are true we definitely can't thank anybody enough.....

    Oru janmam podadu....
    inth nanri enrum kadanai theerka.....

    thanks for your fb.....
     
  7. Shanvy

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    aruna yaar....

    Yes...hum un logon sey hain jo dil ki suntey hain, dil sey boltey hain..:queen.
    Ab tum koh kaise shukriya ada karey ...
    jo hamari bekaar khi likaai par bhi...
    wah wah karne lagti ho....
     
  8. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi saraswathi,

    when i am in confusion, i start thinking of all the probabilities of solutions...so all permutations and combinations...(my elective subject was OR and statistics...bonkbonk)

    You are true we definitely can't thank anybody enough.....

    Oru janmam podadu....
    inth nanri enrum kadanai theerka.....

    thanks for your fb.....
     
  9. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice one at the time of Thanksgiving, Shanthi!

    It is true that we cannot thank anybody more as everybody has helped us in a way or the other,
    that is why it is said 'nanri kadan' some of which cannot be repaid!

    sriniketan
     
  10. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi sriniketan,

    Thanks for stepping in........
     

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