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Darling (your's Raaj)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rajkumarankar, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. rajkumarankar

    rajkumarankar Senior IL'ite

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    Darling (Your's Raaj)


    Darling
    Don't know whether I can use this word
    But I loved more than any one in this world
    I kept your image in my heart
    I filled your memories in my mind and living my life

    I feel you everytime and everywhere ''Darling''
    And I never missed you even for a second
    But this world made me to realize that I am alone here
    And now I really need you my ''Darling''

    Your smiling face used to say that you love me
    Your every word that you spoke to me , made me to feel that you love me
    But how can I be So blind and So onesided
    That I am waiting for the past 13 years for you my love
    And the other side, You don't even remember my name

    Now I called you and expressed everything about my love
    And I tried to remember you all the memories that I held in my mind
    Now you recognize me and like me
    But you said you cannot love me
    I told that I will wait some more years even whole my life for you
    But you said it's tooo late
    Darling ! You would have given me few minutes , I would have shown you how much I love you
    In every of my breath I feel you
    In every of my heart beat I still love you
    So , let me live this life in a feel that you still love me ''Darling''
    ....................................Raaj


     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow waiting for 13 years that is a long time waiting for someone in life so long.....
    Now a days people don't wait for 2 days...
    Nice wordings.
     
  3. Yashikushi

    Yashikushi Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    your words emphasize your longing for love and that too such a long time.The last few lines were touching.
    Excellent expressions.
     

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