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Dark Chapter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Sep 10, 2024.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

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    Hard story of Dark Chapter
    Known through over the top
    I looked back on times past
    Gone through the incident
    It was a hard pill to swallow
    I can imagine sitting on couch
    Feel the pain of every episode

    In the dim twilight all set to fly
    Passengers in ecstatic state
    when heard safety briefing,
    estimated time to reach destination
    A sudden twist in the story of journey
    Not because many traveling all alone
    Not because for someone it's first flight
    Not because it's tedious
    Not any of the choices listed above
    All passengers dumbfounded with wide opened eyes
    They found surroundings dark,dread in the flight
    Never a one predicted they will land in soup instead of landing on runway
    After half an hour of journey they heard from hijacker hang down
    One side there was battle for life and death
    Other side there was issue for how to settle with negotiation
    After a week-long negotiations authorities released three high-profile terrorists, in exchange of the hostages’ freedom.
    There was liberty,but journey has altered the course of their lives forever.

    Spl note: I felt to write after watching IC 814 kandhar hijack ott platform.Hope I made presentation to the point.
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan IL Hall of Fame

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    Yes you did.
    @Gamma after watching the movie in Netflix texted here in Il recommending it to watch . Your jotting summed up the story in short & sweet poetry.
    It looks you are in a state of launching into poetry many events that pass by. Great feel and mood must be impelling you to make a poem out of every sensational moment in relation and in history.
    God bless.
     
  3. RatnaMalliswari

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    Hello @Thyagarajan sir
    Thank you for your appreciation, getting such comments from scholar's like you is a honour to me.Keep reading, posting, liking and ofcourse comment most important one which inspires to write more.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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