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Dable in Drabble - Rear View Mirror

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Khushi78, Dec 3, 2014.

  1. Khushi78

    Khushi78 Silver IL'ite

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    [h=3]Dable in Drabble - event[/h]
    One dark eerie night she waved and he stopped his auto. Admiring her face from the rear view mirror he dropped her.
    Treading back deep through the night he glanced at the mirror to see the beautiful face again.


    Next day morning villagers took his cold body home from the highway.
     
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  2. Khushi78

    Khushi78 Silver IL'ite

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    thanks for the likes sir!
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

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    Sorry buddy. Didn't have time to give a feedback earlier.
    Nice one this! I was able to guess it though! Write more.
    And, request you to address me just as 'rgs'. -rgs
     
  4. Jey

    Jey Administrator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    oh, what a tragedy!
     
  5. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Kushi

    In your next entry add the announcement thread in the post and make an entry in the announcement thread about your story.
     

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