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Cricket Theme Song

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by reshmirn, Jan 20, 2011.

  1. reshmirn

    reshmirn Bronze IL'ite

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    One of the friends of my DH had been insisting my DH to write a theme song,which they need to tune and record, for their cricket club. My lazy DH used to postpone and later asked me to give a try... so this was the result (not yet given to the club/his friend). Kindly comment, criticise and let know if any changes could make it better..

    Here goes my attempt (not able to call it a poem/song by myself !)

    Give us Strength Give us Courage
    Let us play N Let us Triumph
    Keep us going, all in a rhythm
    Tuned to the song of the Almighty

    We are the Trivandrum lions
    Roaring N Daring we go………….

    It’s not the bat in our hands,
    It’s the world at our feet
    There’s a team that will not yield
    The team that strikes like thunder

    We are the Trivandrum lions
    Roaring N Daring we go………….

    Boundaries are ours, Wickets are ours
    In our true spirits we play
    To bring honor to our team
    Together we go, united we play

    We are the Trivandrum lions
    Roaring N Daring we go………….

    The day is ours, the cup is ours
    We play as one to rejoice
    We strive as one for the cup of life
    Here we go unto there we go

    We are the Trivandrum lions
    Roaring N Daring we go………….

    We are the Champions, Victory is ours
    No game is this, but life for us
    United we play, elegant n steady
    Here we go unto there we go

    We are the Trivandrum lions
    Roaring N Daring we go………….
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Theme song was good to read. A small suggestion if I may add? It would be better if you add some lines which say about the team adhering to the spirit of the game, sportsmanship etc. -rgs
     
  3. reshmirn

    reshmirn Bronze IL'ite

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    Thanx a lot for the immediate response and sweet appreciation.
    I am indeed grateful towards such suggestions/criticisms...100 thanks for that. could you please explain and help me add in lines...
     
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    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Tried these lines. Please see if it is ok. And feel free to change them to your need if you see them worthy.
    We always strive towards,
    A fair and honest play.
    Our passion's only towards,
    Winning every day!

    We promise all who watch us play,
    True spirit and sportsmanship.
    And give our best on every day,
    Never once will we slip.
     
  5. nimmimoorthy

    nimmimoorthy Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice song and nice suggestions by Shri.
     

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