One of the friends of my DH had been insisting my DH to write a theme song,which they need to tune and record, for their cricket club. My lazy DH used to postpone and later asked me to give a try... so this was the result (not yet given to the club/his friend). Kindly comment, criticise and let know if any changes could make it better.. Here goes my attempt (not able to call it a poem/song by myself !) Give us Strength Give us Courage Let us play N Let us Triumph Keep us going, all in a rhythm Tuned to the song of the Almighty We are the Trivandrum lions Roaring N Daring we go…………. It’s not the bat in our hands, It’s the world at our feet There’s a team that will not yield The team that strikes like thunder We are the Trivandrum lions Roaring N Daring we go…………. Boundaries are ours, Wickets are ours In our true spirits we play To bring honor to our team Together we go, united we play We are the Trivandrum lions Roaring N Daring we go…………. The day is ours, the cup is ours We play as one to rejoice We strive as one for the cup of life Here we go unto there we go We are the Trivandrum lions Roaring N Daring we go…………. We are the Champions, Victory is ours No game is this, but life for us United we play, elegant n steady Here we go unto there we go We are the Trivandrum lions Roaring N Daring we go………….
Theme song was good to read. A small suggestion if I may add? It would be better if you add some lines which say about the team adhering to the spirit of the game, sportsmanship etc. -rgs
Thanx a lot for the immediate response and sweet appreciation. I am indeed grateful towards such suggestions/criticisms...100 thanks for that. could you please explain and help me add in lines...
Tried these lines. Please see if it is ok. And feel free to change them to your need if you see them worthy. We always strive towards, A fair and honest play. Our passion's only towards, Winning every day! We promise all who watch us play, True spirit and sportsmanship. And give our best on every day, Never once will we slip.