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Cherish you all

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Feb 28, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi all, wrote this sometime back...forgot to post it..

    On days when everything looks bleak
    On days when i want to share happiness
    On days when I shed tears
    Who holds my hand...my family.

    They are the people, we are blessed,

    they are the people whom we chose,
    They are the people who love me
    for what I am without judging me...


    So,if I were to die today,
    I am sure I have few who will cry,
    My near and dear ones
    who are always there when I need them
    and I try to be there when they need me

    This is my wish of love to all loved ones..
    I love you all and cherish you all
    the way you all deserved to be cherished.
     
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  2. sathyavenkat

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    Good one shanthi, Keep posting -sathya
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Shanthi
    Beautiful poem yaar..........ya became a bit sad after reading it
    I love you too my dear................
     
  4. sathya

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    hello shanthi
    ennachu pa
    thso thso pona porthu vidu
    ................
    azhathe azhathe en thozi
    nalla oru soppanam naanum kanden
    thozhigal koottamaai nirainthirukka
    aattamum paattamum pala irukka
    thernthedutha ilavarasiyay nee jolikka
    pattu pattaday uduthi kaiyil koppai nee pera
    santhosha kaatril anaivarum kai thatti
    oru sangeetha osai arangame niraikka....

    sathya
     
  5. aishu22

    aishu22 Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shanthi,
    Good poem...Made me feel sad too after reading it.
     
  6. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you sathya
     
  7. Shanvy

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    love you yaar....

    It was never to become sad...just wanted to appreciate our family whom we take for granted...
     
  8. Shanvy

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    sathya

    nothing happened. i just wrote it long back..but would not mind writing a few more scribblings to get such good lines from you....
     
  9. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Aishu dear,

    thank you. did not want to make you feel sad. it was just a fact/retrospection, have i really taken care of my family, given them all that they deserve or do I take them for granted....
     
  10. Sriniketan

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    As always family-oriented one, Shanthi, very nice one.

    do we take them for granted no no...or they...only time will answer....

    sriniketan
     

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