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Catamaran

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Rajeswari Ashok, Jan 21, 2009.

  1. Rajeswari Ashok

    Rajeswari Ashok Bronze IL'ite

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    Overawed by Sea
    its waves and tides
    lashing away at banks,

    Its force, resistance, resonance
    marvels the creator's beauty.

    But journey with catamaran
    turned thoughts upside down

    Sea at the deep side
    is quiet and calm
    made me think
    Is it not the same with out life?

    Need for a catamaran to
    swift past cutting all the waves
    and tide against with full
    force to surge
    towards the calmer, peaceful
    side of LIFE!

    Rajeswari Ashok
     
  2. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice poem. Enjoyed each and every line. Yes we need the catamaran to help us surge towards peace in life too! Keep writing:)
     
  3. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Rajeshwari,

    You are very good at expressing.

    Experiences act as the catamaran that guides you through life.

    good one.
     
  4. Rajeswari Ashok

    Rajeswari Ashok Bronze IL'ite

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    Thank you anand chitra and shanvy. I am really excited to pen few more poems.
    Hip Hip Hurray IL.
    God bless IL members.:cheers
    Rajeswari ashok
     

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