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Buried Memories - Episode 25

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sapthu02, Dec 23, 2011.

  1. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Just no words that i could praise you about this story all that I could do for you is to nominate it for the finest post for the new year. All the very best.
    There is a small request before posting the next story do read it well and correct the small grammatical mistakes. you cannot make them out much but stil... Sorry if I have hurt you by this. This is just to see a perfect work of yours. No doubt you are excellent in story telling.
     
  2. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    O thank you aruna.. will do that.. this is a feedback for improvement and iam sure there is nothing to be hurted,..
    will work on the feedback well..
    Thanks a lot for nominating my story.. wish all will be good..
     
  3. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sapthu,

    I just finished reading your 25+ episodes of Buried Memories. It made a good read. You maintained the charm of the story through all the episodes.

    The story was full of twists and turns. It also carried the novelty of treating love, lust, break ups and affairs in our very Indian atmosphere in a matter of fact way. With one easy swipe, you washed away all the tabus we seem to hold on to by creating characters who are human and real. If you wanted, you could have easily turned your story into a melodramatic one. Instead, you went ahead with an easy flow and solutions which also reflected in the behavior of your characters!

    Like Aruna has mentioned, a little bit of editing would have helped to maintain a flawless narration.

    Congratulations on being nominated to the FP of the month by Aruna! :thumbsup

    L, Kamla
     
  4. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you Kamala and Aruna.. I will work on my second story.. LOVE BLOSSOM.. with reference to your feedback..
     
  5. smileAlways

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    Dear sapthu,
    Just completed marathon reading of all episodes. Find it from the finest posts thread. Excellent narration and story.
    Can't believe it's your first story. Keep on writing. Waiting for your next one..
     
  6. sapthu02

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    Thank you smile always..
     
  7. Deepu04

    Deepu04 IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Sapthu... I read the whole story... Its simply Awesome.... :) :):)
     
  8. sapthu02

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    thank you deepa..
     
  9. swethareddy86

    swethareddy86 Silver IL'ite

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    Beautiful Saptu, i read all the 25 chapters at a go. loved reading Burried memories .. :)
     
  10. archana2008

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    sapthu, wow super duper. i finished reading starting to end.. now i have to take a break to pee. did not even get up from my seat. had to read it all :) thanks for sharing wonderful story with all of us :)
     

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