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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Nov 19, 2007.

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  1. Nov 21, 2007 #11
    Arunarc

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    Oh wonderful wordings Shanthi.
    Only you can understand better the situation, to be far away from your hamsafar ya.
    It is touchy har musafir, zindagi ka sahara
    nahin hota unkey siwa....
    This is so true...........How ever strong you are if your musafir is not with you near by you really miss them.

    Yeh if you write such sad poems................
    I think someone hasn't seen this poem still otherwise......................
    anyway dear cheer up your jaan will be with you.

    Thanks for your concern Shanthi I am a bit ok today. I am not use to cold, windy winters so trying to get adjusted to the climate.

    Take care
     
    Arunarc, Nov 21, 2007
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  2. Nov 21, 2007 #12
    Arunarc

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    Hi Sunkan
    wah wah kya lajawab reply great
    pahunch ja us paar...........
    yes Shanthi Sunkan is correct please go and let us know about your happiness
    jo aap ki khushi par bhichaye baite hain.sukoon miley hamey bhi.
    Great wordings Sunkan.


     
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  3. Nov 21, 2007 #13
    Arunarc

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    Hello Meen
    Offcourse it makes sense ya wonderful reply
    Intezar may jo maja hai woh kisi may nahi...............

     
    Arunarc, Nov 21, 2007
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  4. Nov 21, 2007 #14
    Reenae

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    PAAS BETHO TABIYAT BEHAL JAAYEGI
    MAUT BHI AAGAYI HO TOU TAL JAEGI
     
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  5. Nov 21, 2007 #15
    Reenae

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    Very nice indeed Shanvy.

    Zindagi ki raahon mei ranj-o-gham ke mele hai
    bheedh hai qayamat ki phir bhi ham akele hai...

    Very well written Shanvy!

    Regards
     
    Reenae, Nov 21, 2007
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  6. Nov 21, 2007 #16
    Shanvy

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    Hi reena yaar,

    aap jaise dost ho toh dil apne aap behel jaati hai...

    hame abhi gham se koi shikayat nahi...
     
    Shanvy, Nov 21, 2007
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    Shanvy

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    hi aruna,

    Aap key dua keliye shukriya.


    take care
     
    Shanvy, Nov 21, 2007
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  8. Nov 21, 2007 #18
    Vysan

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    Dear Shan,

    Maloom nahi, ithna dukhi hai thum
    Aur thak jathi ho
    karthey hai batein roj
    chat aur telephone say
    phir bhi dil mangtha hai more

    hamney soch samjkey liya tha
    yeh faislah...kya socha, kya huva..
    Kya karoon main bhi majboor..
    mera bhi halat boora tumse door....
    .
    Man proposes… GOD Disposes….

    Sorry, My Hindi is not so good… What to do… I couldn’t write as fluently as you….

    Pray to GOD, we cross it at the earliest….

    Dear Arunarc,

    Though read it…. Sometimes our hands are tied because of the commitments and for the kids & family….

    Thanks a lot….
     
    Vysan, Nov 21, 2007
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  9. Nov 21, 2007 #19
    sunkan

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    dear shan and veda,
    whatever may be ur sacrifices but it will go by the name, nothing can compensate ur companionship so plan something fast, when the children grow they will have their respective spouse and it would remain only your duty, so pl do consider self too, and plan fast, i am sure you can plan something if you really put ur mind too, man travels around the world but comes back home to find it, some great person has said this, nothing can compensate the timely companionship, later u will need each other to play a nurse role and companionship but these are the years to be happy with small little things, like the rain dripping both sipping coffee together, another relative shouting coming to her rescue, children problem helping then and there, and many things i could go on, parent teacher meeting a one up when u are available for her.she is feeling low your presence is enough money is always in shortage but the companion ship money cant buy....sunkan
     
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  10. Nov 22, 2007 #20
    Arunarc

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    Hello Veda
    Aap ka bhi hindi lajawab hai. Kithnay kubsoorthi say jawab diya hai. Jada din intezer karaney mat do aapney Shan say nahi to aisey poems bohut aa jayagi.

    We love to read her poems but not the sad one from her she is a jolly good lady.
     
    Arunarc, Nov 22, 2007
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