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Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by thechanakya, Mar 31, 2015.

  1. jayasala42

    jayasala42 IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice narration.Sometime back I read a write up on 'the imaginary thought process of the foetus',1. how the initial bubble feels,
    2.how a natural cosy bed of soft muscles have already developed by the mother nature expecting conception;
    3.some lady's inexplicable joy to welcome someone new into home;
    4.the gradual formation of the body parts with graphic description,;
    5.how the foetus feels about the voices and noises,;
    6.his/her mother's wonderful imaginations,
    7.how it was being fed and growing automatically from a remote feeder point;
    8.that feeder point was taken extreme care of;
    9.Ah,how nice it was being carried from place to place;
    10.that dark room with nothing to see,;
    11.Quite comfortable, but some sort of fear pricks in;
    12.surrounded by a strange foul smell-of flesh,blood;
    13.Imprisoned in a dark, uncleaned toilet;
    14.strange ideas about who he was earlier and where he lived and under what 15.circumstances he came into this horrible prison;Is it poorva janma gnana?
    16.'Let me perish in this horrible cell never to come again;
    17.But that is an unfulfilled wish;
    18.some force is pushing him out through a narrow corridor;
    19.Falling to the mother earth upside down;
    20.thrown into a strange place;
    21.he starts crying while all others are laughing;
    22.All the details of the previous home which were visible crystal clear,now totally erased

    Unto a new home, surroundings to see the cycle once again.

    Actually when read this, I was reminded of matru panchakam of Adi Sankara .
    I expected some snippet about the little darling's narration of events after her birth.
    Now it is in the form of cute little diary, to continue.
    Chanakya was an adept in administration and finance and he wrote Artha sastra.
    Now here is another Chanakya,the child psychologist to pour the heart of the young as a nice travellogue.
    Expecting interesting episodes from the tender heart.

    Jayasala 42
     
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  2. AprilLisa

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    very nice and cute narration!! :thankyou2: Waiting for more.......
     
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  3. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    Welcome to IL Chanakya! You start with a bang with baby diaries and enjoyed your write up. Hope that many more posts will be coming forth!

    PS
     
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  4. Kamla

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    Welcome 'thechanakya' sir!

    Its not often that someone lands in IL with such a bang! As I note, you just joined and this is your first post and it was at once nominated to our Finest Posts for the month by Satchitananda! Congratulations!!

    Hmm, I note in spite of getting many feed backs, the Chanakya has not replied till now. Perhaps Only the new but very precocious baby will respond? Well, all waiting!!

    By the way, are you the 'Dodo' by any chance??!

    L, Kamla
     
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  5. Mindian

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    Very cute :) a hearty welcome to snippets, Chanakya.I liked your style of writing
     
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  6. thechanakya

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    thankyou satchidananda!! sorry for the delayed acknowledgment!
     
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  7. thechanakya

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    thanks akansha for ur reply and kind words.
     
  8. thechanakya

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    thanks mindian for the warm welcome
     
  9. thechanakya

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    thanks pushpavalli for the warm welcome and encouragement.
     
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