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As i walk through my memories

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Oct 19, 2007.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    As I walk through my memories,
    I see how far I have come…
    What all I have gone through…
    Is this really me, I am amazed..

    The hurts and shocks I survived,
    The surprises and lessons I learnt,
    The trials and turbulences that
    Have taught me more values
    And cemented by belief
    In love…..

    However far I go, I look back
    to keep my foot on the ground,
    However high I fly, I look down,
    To gauge the distance ….
    I have come, so returning back
    Will never hurt

    As I grow older day by day,
    I remember the hugs, holding hands,
    The smiles and the laughs….
    And thank god for giving me a life of love….
    Through the loves of my life.


    First attempt by me:eek
     
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  2. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shan,

    It is really great one...

    May god bless you to achieve much much more heights... the loved ones always shower the love...the laughs and smiles always be with you...the hugs and holding hands to stand by you...The turbulances and shocks vanish... the values and beliefs remain and you keep moving forward and no reason to go backwards...
     
  3. Cheeniya

    Cheeniya Super Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Shanthi
    I cant believe that it's your first attempt at writing a poem. It's full of feelings, honesty and truth. I think you should continue your efforts in putting down your thoughts in verse. I wish you all the best!
    Sri
     
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    Shobanag Bronze IL'ite

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    Shanthi - that was an amazing poem - your first attempt you say? Simple, soulful, from the heart. Keep them coming!
     
  5. Tamildownunder

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    Dear Shanvy,

    I am not able to beleive that this is your first attempt. You have written nice lines. Write more. Wish you all the best.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  6. Shanvy

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    Hi veda,

    Thanks ................
     
  7. Shanvy

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    Hi sri,

    Thanks for peeping in...just tried to write it...thanks once again...will try again
     
  8. Shanvy

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    Hi shobana,

    I have never attempted poetry sans a few caption writing for the photo contest in chandamama long long back....
    Thanks for peeping in......
     
  9. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi ramansir,

    Thanks for the encouragement. but honestly this is my first attempt...thats why:eek
     
  10. priyauc

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    cant believe this is the first attempt, has so much of ur feelings and emotions. very touchy:thumbsupkeep it going:thumbsup
     

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