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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Devika Menon, May 14, 2008.

  1. geeth

    geeth Senior IL'ite

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    Yes dear devika,
    i was away to chennai last previous week end and then had guests..that is why....i was not seen here

    love
    geeth
     
  2. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    My Dear Friend so good to have you back!!
     
  3. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Devika,

    Hmmm.

    I am sitting here, trying to write to you after reading this really really beautiful, woe laden poem.
    Having read your 'Ma..thanks', can't get rid of the feeling that she was in your thoughts while penning this. But..., I should not be hasty in saying such things knowing how sensitive a writer you are. You do not need real life incidents, I think your sensibilities bring forth these wonderful write ups, be it prose or poem. I am still reeling under the emotions that 'The Adopted Vision' aroused.
    May is coming to an end. A fresh new month is about to start, June, which swings between spring and summer---chirping birds, warmth and greenery etc. Hey Devika, how about a change of mood...write something chirpy and cheerful. I want to keep smiling?!! And you have the magic wand...your pen, make that happen :)

    L, Kamla
     
  4. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Thankyou so much Kamla for writing in.
    knowing how busy you are here with all of us expecting your presence here, there and everywhere , i am so glad you made it. I am blessed!!

    Ok now firstly thanks that you loved this poem, yes there was somebody in mind but certainly not my mother. Just an imagination.!!
    Kamla I have penned a couple of fun filled poems too may be more this very month but guess you havent read it dear , no complaints , with so many posts rushing in ,its difficult for you to keep track , but here in the poems section there is one called Do you love MA or Pa and in the blogs section there is one called The Beauty of Dawn. Do check it out when you have the time and ofcourse the month began with a poem called Kaleidoscope for Varalotti Sir!!

    Love,
    Devika
     
    Last edited: May 30, 2008
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    Dear DM,

    That is a great poem talking about the pains and pangs… can feel it…

    Great…

    Veda
     
  6. sharadha

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    :hiya Chechi,

    You made us feel the pain. what more should I say?
     
  7. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Thankyou Veda,

    Glad you liked the poem and brought it out from the closet!!


    DM
     
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    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sis,

    Youve said it all!! Thanks a ton

    Love,
    Chechi
     
  9. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hey

    DM, No pains and pangs friend....do write a cheerful one.....

    but Good one...I could understand it very well....
     
  10. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shanvy,

    Youve unfortunately read only the pain and pangs one.
    There are quite a few cheerful ones contributed here too! My Friend hope you find the time to read and enjoy them

    Love,
    Devika
     

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