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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by periamma, Feb 3, 2018.

  1. periamma

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    SEEING YOUR BEAUTY MY HAPPINESS BOUNCES

    SEEING YOUR PRIDE MY JOY INCREASES

    YOUR SWEET VOICE MELTS MY HEART

    YOUR CHILDISH ANGER MAKE ME LAUGH

    YOUR NAUGHTINESS BRINGS A BIG GRIN

    WHEN YOU ARE ADAMANT I GET ANGER

    WHEN YOU LOSE YOUR TRANSPARENCY

    TEARS ROLL DOWN MY CHEEKS

    THINKING WHY YOU ARE A HYPOCRITE
     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

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  3. Mistt

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    Nice !
    I guess you wrote this poem on your cute kuttiamma. :)
     
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  5. periamma

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    @Mistt Thank you ma.This poem is about naughty girls @maggi32 @kaniths @parineetha @deepthiraj @umasivasankar @Amica and the singing bird @jskls .once we were all in a chat group and enjoyed a lot.it crossed more than 3000 pages.shared our happiness sorrow disappointments etc.etc.such a wonderful virtual family.oh what a golden days!

    Last three lines are for the people whom i came across in my life.
     
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    Oh, my guess was wrong but whoever in your chat group get to know that you wrote this poem about them.:innocent: I had seen that thread too...
    I know Lakshmi writes well and now nice to know that she sings too.
     
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    very nice!!
     
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    @amunique Thanks ma
     
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    So sweet, @periamma. May our golden days return soon! :blush:
     
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