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"and Suddenly You Became My Everything" - The First Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, May 15, 2018.

  1. periamma

    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    welcome Iniya.Good start by you.Always your theme is based on Friendship and you go with a big bang.
     
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    Dear INiyaaaaa,
    Back with another bang..... Story is going too gud. You are a person who gives regular updates.
    So, daily I will have to login to check on what's going to happen next?
    Keep rocking as usual and thanx again for another wonderful treat from you.:cheer::cheer::cheer::cheer:
     
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    vijjis Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi iniya,
    Is anbu her husband.
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    He he he!!! Posting the next episode in another few minutes! :grinning:
    And I would be happy if you address me as Iniyaa rather than Iniyaa ma'am:lol: lol.
    And thank you so much for your love and support!
    Have a wonderful weekend dear :thumbup:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Posting the next episode in few minutes dear :lol:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you so much maa:blush::blush::blush:
    Happy to see your message ma:blush:
    Have a nice weekend:blush:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey Aarthi darling!

    Thank you Thank you thank you!!!:blush:
    Love your support and enthusiasm!!!
    Makes me feel energized to see your comment:blush::blush::blush::blush:
    Thanks once again dear!
    Have a good weekend:blush:
     
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    Good guess dear! But if so, how will she get a call from "Hubby" when Anbu is sitting beside her.
    No worries! Posting the next episode now!:blush:
    But keep guessing dear! I am happy to see different perspectives:blush:
     
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    Episode 3:


    “Heyyy” – Madhu exclaimed.

    “Come come!!! Dinner is ready. You are already late” – Madhu’s mom said with a smile.

    “When did he come?!” – Madhu raised her eyebrows

    “Just now! Seems he forgot to give this medicine to you. Poor guy! So he has come all the way” – Madhu’s mom

    “Oh!” – Madhu kept her handbag on the table.

    “He slept?” – Madhu looked at her mom

    “Yeah. Few minutes back” – Madhu’s mom said as she entered the kitchen.

    “Once again thank you so much Anbu! I really wish this medicine cures my knee pain permanently” - Madhu’s mom came out with plates and tumblers.

    “Even my dad had same problem like you aunty! This is specially made in Kerela. My friend brought for me” – Anbu got up as he kept the coffee cup on the table.

    “Ok aunty! Its time and I will start now!” – Anbu walked towards the main door.

    “Take care! Drive safely” -Madhu’s mom smiled.

    “Ok aunty! See you! Bye Madhu” – Anbu left the house.

    Madhu refreshed and ate her dinner. She washed her hands and went inside the bedroom.

    He was in deep sleep and she kissed his cheek gently.

    She tip toed as she walked out of the room. She sat on the sofa and her mom was washing all the vessels.

    “Why did you come home all of a sudden?!” – Madhu texted Anbu

    “Just want to make sure you reached home safely” – Anbu replied and Madhu didn’t text him back.

    But she knew his care was genuine. There was no necessity for him to come all the way for her. His care was warm and soothing. Madhu was afraid she might need this care and warmth forever. She did not want to get addicted to that care in anyway.

    But her heart was craving for that love and care. She knew it was wrong but her heart was dry without any love or care.

    The clock was about to touch 12 and the calling bell rang.

    Madhu opened the door and Chandran was standing.

    “Maaa…..He came” – Madhu said and sat on the sofa.

    “You want water?”- Madhu asked sincerely

    “No. Its ok” – Chandran kept his bag and refreshed.

    “You guys go and sleep! Its time” - Madhu’s mom said strongly.

    “Hmmmm” – Madhu went inside the room and sat on the bed. She took her phone and kept scrolling for no reason.

    Chandran walked towards the bed and in another ten minutes Madhu heard him snoring.

    This was her everyday life.

    From the day I married him, he is the same. Not even a subtle change.

    She saw her college whatsap group was getting active since her friends were in a different country. She started texting in the group and time was about to reach 1.

    She looked at her husband. He wont even know if am chatting with someone in this midnight. He doesn’t even care. He doesn’t care how I reach home after office. Doesn't care what I wear. Doesn’t care what I eat. Doesn’t care how was my day. Nothing. He barely knows that I exist.

    She remembers sharing that to few of her colleagues and many laughed at her.

    "We all are waiting to have such a husband and you complaining ?!!!"

    "You are really lucky Madhu! You know? My husband doesn’t even allow me to wear sleeveless kurthis…"

    "Does he abuse you?"

    "Does he runs affair with someone else?"

    "Does he drink? Smoking?"

    These were the questions she got from her colleagues.

    Madhu did not know how to explain them.

    Chandran was a teatotaler. He will never have affair with anyone else. He is not that kind. He is in a decent relationship with her mother. Everything was fine. But he has never done what a husband has to do or what a wife expects.

    “You want him to bring you flowers everyday or what?! Oh Come on!!!”

    No….Not so…

    "Then what do you need from him girl?" – Her colleagues frowned and teased her.

    Madhu remembered how she kept quiet when they asked them.


    She wished him to call her when she gets late at work. She wished him to at least sense if she wears a new dress. She wished him to share his everyday experience with him. There was no emotional support, no moral support, no financial support and yet he was her husband and the world addressed the same as well.

    Initially Madhu was trying to adjust and adapt. But as days passed by her heart was becoming drier and drier as her life. When she saw an affectionate couple she realized what she was missing in life. At times she wanted to divorce him. But divorce was a very big word in the family.

    "What has he done to you that you want to divorce him?!! You can never see such a good guy!!!" She remembered few of her relatives’ words.

    At times she got angry on the almighty and she cried in silence.

    “Why did you get me married?!! What did I get from this marriage?” – Madhu cried silently

    The next moment she turned her head. Saw that innocent cute face. She touched those tiny fingers. An involuntary smile emerged on her face. May be for this I got married.

    She wiped her tears and lied on the bed.

    There came a text from Anbu! She saw the time and it was 3 a.m.

    Text at 3 a.m? Madhu was not comfortable with that.

    But she wanted to open the text and see what it was....
     
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    Oh...this is fishy!
     
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