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An Enigma

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Apr 25, 2019.

  1. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks for the encouraging comment, Sir. Your last line has the clue! Oops!
     
  2. Rihana

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    Was the shawl a turquoise blue with arabesque motifs? : ) Then, it will look good when photographed with blue denim and cream-colored cardigan.

    Nicely done and nicely presented. Just hope the two young people don't turn out to be related by blood...
     
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    Lol! Rihana, you can expect such minutiae from the one and only @Thyagarajan Sir! I guess nobody else can compete with him or his memory in such precise descriptions; nothing escapes his watchful eyes.
     
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    Good start . Waiting for the next episode!!
     
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    @GeetaKashyap Finished reading episode one and waiting for the next part.Good start and stopped with a suspense.who is this young man?:fearful:
     
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    Thank you for your comment, Deepika. 2 more episodes in the next 2 days; please visit.
     
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    Thank you, periamma.
     
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    This way I'm afraid your story line shouldn't get twisted and instead of Simran sachdev sahani SHAWL might turn the protoganist. Sachdev wonders welcome accorded refresments orderd for him being a stranger and she continue to suspect - thete could be some mystety sutrounding the shawl which madam sister @Rihana expects or imagines would offer scope for a nice portrait or landscape photo. Colour & motiff of shawl description kept secret to add to suspence perhaps!
    God produces picturesque lawn, scape, shawl and Simrans.
     
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    Wow! A new title for another story from Thyagarajan Sir's desk or a new knitted wear company from Ludhiyana! Sir, please don't guess anymore, you will end up demystifying my plot.:pensive::confused::shakehead:
     
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    :hello:ok aap ka hukkum.
    God, I guess likes tangle, entangle & untangle.
     
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