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An Attempt To Rhyme

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    ALREADY CLIMATE IS CHANGING TO TEACH US SOMETHING SO TRUE,
    WE CAN LEAVE BEHIND,
    THE DAUNTING CHILLNESS GONE BEYOND,
    IN THE OBSCURITY OF OUR MIND,
    HE DESPONDENCY CREATED WITH SHADOW FRIGHTENING,
    THE DEATH LORD DELUSION THROUGH.

    TO THINK OF WARMTH WONDERFUL SUNSHINE,
    THE BIRDS AWAIT TO SWOON AND SING,
    THE RIOT OF COLORS AWAIT THE SPRING,

    2007 TAKES A BACK SEAT SOON TO WELCOME OUR NEW FRIEND 2008
    WITH BRINGS IN THE HOPE FOR JOY, CHANGE AND ENHANCEMENT.
    WITH THE MIRROR OF LIFE SO LARGE AS LIFE,
    TAKE THE GLOW OF SUNSHINE SO BRIGHT,
    REFLECTING THE MOOD OF NATURE TO BUILD IN
    EXHILARATION IN ANTICIPATION .
    SUNKAN

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  2. Paulina

    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,
    Lovely words and colourful picture ushering in 2008 for all of us.:cheers

    Thanks for sharing.

    Your birthday write up was so picturesque too...I could see the whole scene as if like a movie....the thrilled mother with her happy and excited children around her ( as you blew the candles on the cake) and feel the happiness to have your dear mother wishing you and making you feel like a little girl yourself.These are precious memories to cherish forever.

    Love,
    PAULINA:-D
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanku paulina,
    felt encouraging, tried at writing a poem,
    many write and i fell short here, so an attempt..sk
     
  4. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice attempt, Sunkan!
    Go ahead!

    sriniketan
     
  5. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanku srini for your supporting comments..sunkan
     

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