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Amnesia Chat Friends

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sunkan, Aug 14, 2007.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    Amnesia friends…

    The usual chat
    Shekar ..hello good morning how r u..
    Mini . good morning fine here happy to know ur fine..
    S. had ur break fast??
    M..ya the usual idli wada and you
    S. today my wife made dosa with the usual green chutney
    M . oh good …
    S..Did you go for your walk
    M. No da unable to go, nobody along I have told you many a time about the problem..
    S. hey your sugar level will shoot up, mind u..
    M. I know but then what can I do,
    S. mmmmm I am in a different city otherwise we could go together,
    M. How sweet, ya what u say is right, it would be great to walk by the sea, you are lucky you know,,
    S. What lucky, at this age all look at you as if you are from the golden era, they give you a snide remark.
    M. Oh! Come on take it in stride..
    S. Did you have your breakfast??
    M. [thinks oh no not again]…I told you I had idli vada, check above..
    S.kkk
    M.So when do you plan the trip ?
    S. any time you say?
    M. don’t give me this line,
    S. No I mean it,
    M. ok this week I am free do drop in, and give me the details of the train, I will pick you up,
    S. Sure, why don’t you book for me, u know I had a secretary all my life so now find it lazy to do it on my own.
    M. ya ya I happen to be your secretary for sometime now, I can understand…
    S. What da, you feeling bad..
    M. no no why should I..
    S do give me the details..
    M. sure once I book I will send the details.
    After a week.
    S. mini I am coming friday, what would you like from goa,
    M. you come safe that is the first hurdle…
    Next day mini is at the railway station after enquiries, waiting and waiting where did Shekar go
    Which train did he take, so much of tension when the age is not normal, he is 75 and she 60 but at least
    She is still sane she thinks as she has arrived one day earlier waiting for shekar….

    SUNKAN
     
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  2. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear sunkan,

    Although I guessed at the start that the people must be aged, finding at the end that they are 75 & 60 made me laugh first and then realised that you have brought out beautifully the sharing of love between two aged people. I enjoyed reading it.

    Regards,

    TDU

    HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY
     
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  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear TDU,
    it is happening every where, though i dont know what they seek, but i sometime face a lot of repeat questions and sometime go mad, so on the basis of my chats i wrote this, with a little added fiction...sk
     
  4. Manjureddy

    Manjureddy Gold IL'ite

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    Hi
    It can be so infuriating really, this repearting endlessly. But so sad, what to do !

    It was amusing to read.
    rgds
    manjula
     
  5. roopadadia

    roopadadia Silver IL'ite

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    Good one Sunkan.

    Quite amusing.

    Roopa.
     

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