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Always being there........

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Jan 26, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    When i am clouded by doubts
    and look out for a reassurance,
    You just use your eyes to tell,
    here i am, by your side..

    When I feel sad and tears blind me,
    there you are to just wipe them
    pat my cheek and say it is ok
    saying, here I am, by your side..

    When I feel happy and laugh out loud,
    knowing I could become breathless..
    there you sit beside rubbing my back ,
    saying, here i am, by your side...

    When I am angry and am spitting fire,
    like the dragon that our son draws,
    there you are saying relax,in your soothing voice,
    saying, here i am, by your side....

    When I feel I need to sit alone
    think and analyse, retrospecting,
    you sit just holding my hand,
    saying, here i am, by your side....

    When I feel everything is wrong,
    and things are still going wrong..
    you just wrap me in your arms,
    saying, here i am , by your side...


    Though reasons keep us apart,
    A small whiff of a breeze ,
    A paper with your signature,
    A hi in the offline message,
    A hello on the phone,
    A sniff of your perfume,
    Everything feels so right,
    telling me you are here,
    as always by my side...

    you're everything special
    that means love to me..
    God is love, love is god
    everybody says....
    but for me you are love
    love is you....
     
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  2. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear shanthi,
    lovely poem, and what words and flow right out of your heart, hope veda reads this and am sure he does...sunkan
     
  3. Jananikrithsan

    Jananikrithsan Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Shanthi,
    Lovely poem, so full of emotion, meaning and love.
    Immediate Attention Veda!!!!
     
  4. Saraswathipv

    Saraswathipv IL Hall of Fame

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    Lovely poem shanthi....

    Can't write like u to appreciate......so just :hatsoff:hatsoff
     
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  5. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Dearmost Shanthi
    Awesome Awesome poem words fail me to express how beautiful you have worded and created this wonderful poem
    Hats off multi talented Woman:hatsoff and best wishes to both of you.
     
  6. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wowwwwwwwwwww lovely poem Shanthi
    It was nice to read a poem from you after a long time.
    Just today I got this poem in my mail box. It looks like it has come at the right time to share with you.


    You're a true friend,
    that I want you to know,
    Our love for each other
    has helped us to grow.
    We've been through some tough times,
    but we've made it through,
    The only one I ever trusted was you.

    You helped me through anger,
    you've chased away fears.
    You held me through sadness,
    and kissed away tears.

    You stayed by my side
    when the world turned away.
    You helped me see joy
    when the skies were all gray.

    You were the rainbow
    at the end of the storm.
    You help me be different
    when I shouldn't conform.

    You held my hand
    when you knew we would fall.
    Every heartache,
    you saw me through it all.

    I'm not sure
    I'm always the best friend to you,
    I know I'm not perfect,
    but this much is true.

    When life gets you down,
    And there's nowhere to turn,
    I'll help you through and
    I'll share your concern.

    I'll try my best to return every favor,
    When you're sure that you'll drown,
    then I'll be your lifesaver;
    Even if we both go down.

    Whether we sink or swim
    doesn't matter at all,
    Just know that I'll be there
    whenever you call.

    I'll pull you out
    when life pulls you under.
    I'll be the sun
    when there's lightning and thunder.

    And when it's all over,
    And we've fought every war,
    There's one thing I promise,
    Of this I am sure,
    When the time comes
    that we're put to our rest.
    Be sure that you know that,
    My friend, you're the best.

    And if there is Heaven,
    then I know you'll be there,
    That if you die first
    then you'll hear every prayer.
    And soon I'll join you,
    but just know until then.
    That I'll miss you each day
    'til I see you again.

    At the end of the tunnel,
    you'll be my guiding light,
    You'll lead me to heaven,
    away from the night.

    We'll be there together,
    and we'll never grow old.
    And we'll walk hand in hand
    On the streets paved of gold.
     
  7. Cheeniya

    Cheeniya Super Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Shanthi
    I am envious of
    Federer
    Pele
    Dr.Abdul Kalam
    Narayanamurthy
    Amitab Bachan
    SPB
    and now of you!

    I may be able to emulate others but never a poet. Let me first get my prose straight!
    That was a beautiful poem. How elated Veda should be feeling reading it!
    Sri
     
  8. Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Shan,
    I am dumbstruck with the ease with which your words are flowing !
    Three cheers to my multi faceted young friend !!:queen
    Love,
    Chithra.
    Veda Boy, you are blessed !
     
  9. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shan,

    That was too great / good... I am dumb struck with watery eyes.....

    I really dont know what I should say....

    I cant expect anything better than this one on our Wedding Anniversary....

    Thanks....
     
  10. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    sunkan,

    thank you.
     

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