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Ab hum jawan nahi rahe(I am not young by age but young by heart)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by iyerviji, Nov 30, 2013.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    This poem penned down by me I thought will sound better in Hindi

    ओः जमाना था जब जबहम भी जवान थे
    कही जानेके लिए किसीकी जरूरत नहीं थी
    अब उम्र हो गयी है और बंदन मेबंदे है
    अगर चाहे तो भीअकेलेजाने मेरे अपने नहीं छोड़ेंगे
    जवानी थो नहीं लौट कर आयेगी
    पर जवानी कि यादे अब भी भुला नहीं सकते

    Meaning in English

    Those times I was a young woman
    To ago anywhere did not need any one
    Now I have aged and also tied in family
    If I want also cant go anywhere alone
    As my own people will not allow
    My younger days wont come back
    but the memories of those days cant be forgotten
     
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  2. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice one Viji Ma :thumbsup...like the last 2 lines....we can never forget our youth...best days of our life....:party
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Scorpio dear I was thinking of you while writing this poem and what a surprise the first fb is from you. Thankyou for making my night :) with your first fb, now i will have sound sleep .
     
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    Vijima good one...
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Thanks Meenu , glad you liked the poem
     
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    ARRRREEE............ aap agar jawaan nahin toh phir jawaani apna matlab bhool jaegi, aap voh shaamaaa hain jiske aage harr laoh sar jhukaaegi, kuch log umrr ke daayron ko todd diya karte hain, jawaani unme nahin voh jawaani mein rangg bharaa karte hain, aap mohtarma voh nageena hain jo kiye jaa raha hai roshan yeh jahaan, abb aap hi batain aise anmol insaan ko kya koi apne se duur jaane deta hain kahaan, issi liye aapke chahne waale aapko nahin jaane dete hai akele kissi ooor, tabhi toh appko milke banda khudko bhi kehta hai....... yaraa life mein abb yeh mera dil maaange more..........
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    wah wah Quebecji hum aapke jawab se aasman me ud rahe hai, yeh dil kush huya aur ab jeene ka chah aa gaya hai, bahut shukriya
     
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    Hello Viji Ma'am,

    How are you? Very nice poem.Started imagining you.I know you are beautifulllllllllllllll both ways, in your heart and soul. :)
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Neeshah dear I am fine, how are you. Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the compliments which made my day
     
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    Thank you Viji Ma'am.I am fine.Thanks a again.
     
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