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Aaj ki Taza Shayari

Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by Arunarc, Oct 4, 2007.

  1. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Jara gaur pharmayiyega.....
    Kehte hain ki ISHQ main neend ud jaati hai
    Koi humse bhi ishq kare
    Khambhaqat neend bahut aati hai

    Kar diya izhare-ishq hamne telephone par, laakh rupaye ki bat thi, do rupaye
    main ho gayee (wah wah) Pyaar ke jaam ko aise na piyo ke Adha piya aur adha
    chod diya Yaron yeh pyaar hai pyaar Nahin koi Vim Bar Jo thodasa lagaya aur
    bas hogaya.......!!

    Aur bhi cheezain bahut see lut chuki hain dil ke saath Ye bataya dooston ne
    ishq furmane ke baad; Is liye kamre ki ek ek cheez "check" karta hoon main
    "Ek tere aane se pehle, ek tere jaane ke baad"(wah-wah)

    Log ishq karte hain,
    Bade shor ke saath.
    Humne bhi kiya,
    Bade zor ke saath.
    Magar ab karenge,
    Thoda gaur ke saath.
    Kyonki kal usko dekha,
    Kisi aur ke saath.

    Aansun se palke bhigo leta hoon
    Yaad teri aati hai to ro leta hoon
    Socha ki bhula doon tujhe magar,
    Har baar faisla badal deta hoon
    Tamam umar zindagi se door rahe, Teri khushi ke liye tujse door rahe Ab is
    se badkar wafa ki saza kya hogi Ki tere hokar bhi tujse door rahe.

    :wave Love
    Aruna
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    arunac,

    good one yaar:clap... (vim and uske pehle aur uske baad..highlight yaar)

    Jisko tumhari kadr nahi, uspar itna kyon sochteho....
    kehna hai bahut asaan...
    hum aise dildaar nahi jo yaar ko badle kameez khi tarah....
    pyar kiya tho sirf ek bhar..agar tum mileh yah na milo...
    zindagi guzaar denge tere yaadon se guftagoo kiye...........
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Shanthi
    Thanx u liked it, even I too liked them so have put them for the ladies to read.
    I am not a writer:tongue , what do u want me to highlight on I did not get u. Can you please explan.
    Love
    Aruna

     
  4. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi arunac,

    I mean vim ke saath comparison and after and before were highlight of the poem...

    Even i dont write...but just like to try my hand at replying to a shayari/poem thats all.....
     
  5. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi
    There are 5 and each one is a different one.
    :-D Aruna

     
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    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    Ishq ney nikamma kar diya, verna ham bhi aadmi thay kaam kay

    Love
    Reenae
     
  7. Meeta

    Meeta Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi Aruna
    So good yaar.......loved reading those.......
    Let me put one more.........
    Aap aye humare kabra pe..........Aap aye humare kabra pe.........
    Aur do ansu girake chal diye........
    Diye mein jo tel tha usko lagake chal diye.......

    Regards.
     
  8. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hahaha good one Meeta

     
  9. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    hai aruna,
    wonderful yaar,,

    Log ishq karte hain,
    Bade shor ke saath.
    Humne bhi kiya,
    Bade zor ke saath.
    Magar ab karenge,
    Thoda gaur ke saath.
    Kyonki kal usko dekha,
    Kisi aur ke saath.


    this is just tooo good..sunkan
     
  10. jaishree9

    jaishree9 Silver IL'ite

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    Hi

    Woh hamari gali mae Aye or bole
    Woh hamari gali mae aye or bole
    Kya bole
    woh hamari gali mae aye or bole moongphali lay lo!:clap :clap


    umar bhar ki kuvari ko Pati na mila
    Or vanaspati ke liye bhi line mae khadi thi. :bang :bang
     
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