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a women's poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by gsaikripa, May 1, 2008.

  1. gsaikripa

    gsaikripa Gold IL'ite

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    pls find attached file
     

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  2. Paulina

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    Hi ! saikripa,

    That was one hell of a woman's poem........i could almost hear the sound of the slap ringing in my ears.......wish there were more gutsy women like her ...BRAVO ....fearless woman...:cheers:clap Big Laugh

    Thanks for sharing this beauty!

    warm regards
    PAULINA:wave
     
  3. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dearest Kripa akka,

    With that intensity in tone, I was eagerly going through each and every line and was almost trying to figure out how the lines will end !!!

    All that I could do was.. sit back and Big LaughBig LaughBig LaughBig LaughBig LaughBig Laugh

    I sign off with my silent comments :):):)

    Regards with Love
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
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    Very Nice Kiripa....... Keep rocking... :clap

    brindha..
     
  5. Sriniketan

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    saikripa,
    Fantastic..Big Laugh
     
  6. sunkan

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    kripa,
    classic ma....pavam anda aaalu:hide: sunkan
     
  7. Sudha Kailas

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    Fantastic. He definitely needed this to put him in place.
     
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    The flow of the poem with ending in slap, superb.

    Keep writing.

    Regards
    Asma
     
  9. Nithu

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    Hahahah:biglaugh
    Enjoyed reading it sai,
    i thought, that was a usual stuff about the women's misery
    but really last two lines are an unexpected one and superb:biglaugh
     
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    a good 1 indeed.

    i thought u missed the last line:

    ur slap wasn't as good as his mom's!!!!!!!!

    what u would have done r could have done if he had uttered that?
     

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