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A Thukkiri's story

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by aruna_077, Mar 14, 2010.

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  1. Mar 15, 2010 #11
    varalotti

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    Dear Aruna,

    A very touching story. It is very ironical that Thukkiri who was supposed to bring death actually brings life and happiness to many.

    Everyone who reads a story will have some tears for thukkiri and great praise for you, Aruna, to have penned such a story.

    Now that you have started writing I want you to write at least a story once a week or at least once a fortnight. I have been writing for donkey's years. That make me give this advice to you. Start writing regularly. When we start to write we are unduly obsessed with the quality of our writings. We have to really obsess with the quantity. Quality will automatically go up.
    For your first post this is really great.
    Go for it Aruna. Write more. Write regularly. You can count me everytime you post something in IL.
    best of luck,
    sridhar
     
    varalotti, Mar 15, 2010
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  2. Mar 15, 2010 #12
    Deaf woman

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    Hi aruna,
    Lovely story and with a good message too.Enjoyed the well written story .
     
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  3. Mar 16, 2010 #13
    aruna_077

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    Dear Priesh,

    Am glad you loved the story.

    Thanks for your feedback.

    -Aruna

     
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  4. Mar 16, 2010 #14
    aruna_077

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    Dear Sridhar Sir,

    Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Its my pleasure to have you by my side while I embark on the so called journey of writing.

    I must confess today that "You have been my inspiration".

    I have been reading your stories on God's Love for a very long time. This had a great impact on me. Its this impact that I wanted to share Thukkiri's story with you all.

    When I heard Thukkiri's story, it was as if am reading one of your stories. I felt at peace.

    Though I do not know if I will get ideas/stories on this line on a continuous basis; but I will surely continue to write - on any subject that crosses my mind.

    Thank you once again for being there.

    Love,
    Aruna

     
    aruna_077, Mar 16, 2010
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  5. Mar 16, 2010 #15
    aruna_077

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    Dear Vijji Garu,

    Dhanyavadamulu for the fb! :)

    -Aruna

     
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  6. Mar 19, 2010 #16
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    Hi Aruna,

    A very touching story. God himself does not discriminate - only humans label each other as lucky, unlucky etc. Do post more.
     
    Mythraeyi, Mar 19, 2010
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  7. Mar 30, 2010 #17
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    Congratulations Aruna!

    Looks like with your very first story itself you have won a lot of attention and even a nomination to the FP of the month!

    I read your story with a great curiosity. Though I know Tamil, I had not heard of the word 'Thukkiri'.

    No, this Lakshmi is not thukkiri at all. If anything, she is the most blessed human being. To be so precious to the Lord Himself is something one cannot even dream of.

    A very moving story and well written.

    L, Kamla
     
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  8. Mar 30, 2010 #18
    aruna_077

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    Dear Kamla,

    Thank you so much for reading my story.

    I had no idea about the FP of March. Only from your feedback I got to know that you, Soldier and Mythraeyi have nominated my story.

    I am completely overwhelmed by the warm response from you all. This is really special to me as its my first ever write-up.

    Love,
    Aruna

     
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  9. Mar 30, 2010 #19
    aruna_077

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    Dear Mythraeyi,

    Thank you so much for your kind words and also your nomination for FP of March. This really came in as a surprise.

    Regards,
    Aruna

     
    aruna_077, Mar 30, 2010
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  10. May 11, 2011 #20
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    Very nice story.. I loved reading it
     
    SuccessMinded, May 11, 2011
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