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A Poem in Hindi

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ria2006, Dec 6, 2007.

  1. Ria2006

    Ria2006 Silver IL'ite

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    आरज़ू

    जब तुम थे तो कुछ ग़म ना था
    हम थे एक बेख़बर परिंदे के तरह
    कभी इस कदर तन्हा होके याद करेंगे तुम्हे
    सोचा ना था
    ज़िंदगी तुम्हारे बिना भी जियेंगे सोचा ना था
    आज आलम ये है की तुम्हारा नाम तक याद नही रहता
    हम कभी तुम्हारे थे इसका इल्म तक नही रहता
    लोंगो के सामने अदाकारी करते करते हक़ीकत ही बन गयी है ये
    की ना तुम हो ना तुम्हारी यादें है बस एक धुंधला सा
    कोहरा आ जाता है आखों के सामने कभी कभी
    और कभी कभी मोह्बब्त के गानो पे आँखों के कोने मैं
    कुछ हल्का सा पानी आ जाता है
    अक्सर तो सबसे छुपा लेते हैं पैर कभी कभी जैसे
    ये दिल बैठ जाता है, तब इससे समझा नही पाते
    कुछ इतना बेज़ार हो जाता है की कुछ भी आरज़ू नही करता
    एक वक़्त था दिल कीई बेवक़्त आरज़ू से परेशन थे हम
    और एक आज का दौर है आरज़ू की कमी से हैरान है हम.
     
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  2. kalai

    kalai New IL'ite

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    Kya kavitha he!! Bahuth khoob! Aapki kavitha thodi si dhukh-bari tho he...lekin bahuth achchi he. Aapne khudh likhi he?
     
  3. Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Pyari Riya,
    Vaah, vaah !
    Bahuth acha tha !
    khud likhee aapne?
    Aapko meree badaayiyaan !
    Pyari
    Chithra.
     
  4. Ria2006

    Ria2006 Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks Chitra Mam.. And Kalai

    Yes I wrote it.
     
  5. Saraswathipv

    Saraswathipv IL Hall of Fame

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    Wah Ria..

    Bahuth Khoob.....
     
  6. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    Ria this is superbly written and thought of Bravo!

    Give us more..
     
  7. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow beautiful poem Ria
    From the thread came to know you have written this poem Great yaar so we got one more poet here.
    Keep writting more and keep sharing..........
    Waiting for your next one.............
     
  8. DudeWithAttitude

    DudeWithAttitude New IL'ite

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    Good one! Reminds me of the lyrics 'hame har ghadi aarjoo hai tumhari' from saajan!

    Couple of words I did not understand: Ilm, dhoondhlaa - if someone could tell the meaning - thanks!
     
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  10. Ria2006

    Ria2006 Silver IL'ite

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    Reenae, Arunarc, DudeWithAttitude and Enjoylife.

    Thanks for time to read it. It feels great that to know you folks enjoyed it.

    Here is meaning of words.
    ILM- Awareness,knowledge
    DhunDhla - Foggy
     

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