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  1. Apr 5, 2016 #1
    Scorpio707

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    It’s a lazy afternoon…
    clouded are my thoughts,
    making my head swoon.
    Bright is the light, heavy is my head…
    drum beats in my ears, whereas there
    is nothing but silence in the air.
    Doorbell rings, but I’m lost in thoughts so far away…
    I close my eyes for a moment,
    going back in time, uncoiling myself...
    from the current wicked serpent.
    Floating in bliss, dancing to moves…
    singing to tunes, I was once interested in runes.
    Flamed by reality, bored of monotony…
    this lazy afternoon, opens door
    to philosophy.
     
    Scorpio707, Apr 5, 2016
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  2. Apr 5, 2016 #2
    parineetha

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    Inspiring meens!
    Philosophy?? If bored, I treasure hunt my old bags, crisper trays, hideout places for a solo gulp of a big chocolaaateee bar..:D
     
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    Nice one Meenu. Lovely choice of words. When I was expecting a lovey dovey poem from you, you turned towards philiosophy? Reading anything specific?
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Hey N,

    Yeah philosophy from me...hahahah lol. So you love chocolates ha, nice. Nice to hear from you on this one. Thanks :)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Hi Laks,

    I wrote a "Love" poem right after this, couldn't resist so. Old habits die hard :) . Will post it shortly. Not reading anything at the moment, if I read too philosophy is rare Laks :D .
     
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    [QUOTE="Scorpio707, post: 3798153, member: 280216
    Flamed by reality, bored of monotony…
    this lazy afternoon, opens door
    to philosophy.     [/QUOTE]
    Hi Meenu :) how are you? Nice signature and poem too.
    Sometimes I feel same but philosophy maybe it's take long time for me.
    Waiting for your new poem on love.:)
     
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    Not a lazy afternoon but a philosophical one! Lovely poem, lofty idea, lazy to blissfully more...!
     
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    Hi Meenu :) how are you? Nice signature and poem too.
    Sometimes I feel same but philosophy maybe it's take long time for me.
    Waiting for your new poem on love.:)[/QUOTE]

    Hi Latha,

    I'm good, how are you?? Happy to hear from you:) . I'm not into philosophy either, just one of those times :tonguewink:. Take care, thanks.
     
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    Hi PL,

    Glad you liked my poem. Thanks :)
     
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    Awesome.
     
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