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மாறிவிட்ட வாழ்கை முறை

Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by natpudan, Mar 15, 2010.

  1. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    மாறிவிட்ட வாழ்கை முறை

    வெண்மையில் கருப்பாய், எடுப்பாய் இருப்பேன்,
    பல வண்ணங்களில் வண்ணமயமாய் இருப்பேன்,

    வாழ்வினையும் வண்ணமயமாக்கிடுவேன்,
    உன் எண்ணங்களை என் மூலம் பிரதிபலிக்கும்போது.

    சிறு பிராயத்தில் என்னை நீ உபயோகிக்காத,
    நாளே இல்லை, எனச் சொன்னால் மிகையாகாது.

    இன்றோ நான் உனக்கு அழகுப் பொருளாகி விட்டேன்,
    எப்போதாவது தான் என்னை உபயோகப்படுத்துகிறாய்.

    நான் நானாகத்தான் இருக்கிறேன் இன்று வரை,
    உன் மாற்றங்களை பார்த்துக் கொண்டு தான் இருக்கிறேன்.

    உன் முன்னேற்றம் எனை மகிழ்ச்சிக் குள்ளாக்குவது உண்மைதான்,
    எனையும் கொஞ்சம் அவ்வப்பொழுது கூடுதல் மகிழ்ச்சிக் குள்ளாக்க மாட்டாயா நண்பனே?

    மீண்டும் எனை முன்பு போல் உபயோகப்படுத்த மாட்டாயா நண்பா?
    என்று பாவம் என் பேனா, எனையும், என் கணினியையும் பார்த்துப் புலம்புகிறது.
     
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  2. Soldier

    Soldier Gold IL'ite

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    Oh! that was wonderful.

    Actually I had something like this in mind to write in snippets - not exactly abt pen alone. What revolution these days in anything and everything.

    Lovely. When I read u poem, was reminded of those pens by brand Redleaf, Reynolds .. Later the Stickpen, now the gel pen, liquiflow and what not.

    I too miss writing - not only my cogent and good writing (thoughts) but my own handwriting. Becos my handwriting is too good. I love it. (don't pl think am yapping off)

    Just like how u say i give good fbs, my friends and relatives used to enjoy my writing - the stuff and the beautiful handwriting and appreciate me. Now we use smileys in our posts. I used to draw them you know.

    Yeah times have changed now. I too lost the habit of writing letters and only send mails. At least am happy everyone njoys my mails too. My only drawback is that i can never come to the point straight. Konjam vala vala!!! what to do. Pl bear with me:rotfl
     
  3. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Soldier,

    Still you can write in Snippets. Each & every one uf us have a different style. So it's fun writing. Do write.

    I believe that you should be writing well.

    Vala Vala, Kozha Kozhannaalum, interesting to read your fb's.

    Keep writing. Thanks Soldier.
     
  4. iyerviji

    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Nats

    Superb one

    Pen must be saying this also


    உனக்கு டிகிரி வாங்கி குடுத்தது நான் தானே
    ஆனால் நீ என்னை மறந்து விட்டாய்
    எனக்கும் ஒரு காலம் வரும் அப்போ பார்த்துக்கலாம்
    என்ன நான் சொல்வது சரிதானே மகனே

    தவறு இருந்தால் மன்னித்து கொள்ளவும்

    viji
     
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  5. Soldier

    Soldier Gold IL'ite

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    hey Nats!
    Sorry for intruding here.
    See threads started by me. I am not sure if I made the post in the wrong forum. So far no replies. If u know anyone also kindly refer and help. Some shipbuilding firms, yards, Chennai /Vizag/Cochin port trust etc may be the right choice.
     
  6. yams

    yams Platinum IL'ite

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    saththiyama ippadi paena pencil,pressure cooker nu kavidha ezhudha ungala vitta yaarum ella!!! great!!:biglaugh:biglaugh:biglaugh
     
  7. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    விஜி மா,

    நீங்கள் சொன்னதில் தவறேதும் இல்லை.
    தவறா என கேட்டதே மிகப் பெரிய தவறு.
     
  8. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    Soldier,

    It's Institute of Oceanography & Marine Technology.

    Intrusions are welcome.
     
  9. natpudan

    natpudan Gold IL'ite

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    Kaathalai neengal kuththakaikku eduththu vitteerkal.

    Veniyo iyarkayai kuththakaikku eduththu vittaarkal.

    Enjiyiruppavai ivai mattum thaan, adhai Sriniyum, Naanum pangu pottuk kolkirom. Ok vaa? :)
     
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    Dear Nat,
    Have you copied Sri's poem [​IMG] or following her way....:rotfl

    penaavin polamballil unmaiyullathu.:rant Paavam

    Nice poem dear. :thumbsup
     

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