தேரடி வீதியில் தேவதை வந்தால்...

IL veedhiyil devadhai vandhal
Azhagu sorkal aadaiyaga
karuththu mikka varigalo aniyaga
Kavin nadai payinru vandha Kavithai penne
Sriniyin kaiyil mattum I ththanai oli migundhu poorippaaga
Thigazhum maayaththil naangal kattundu kidakkirom.
anbhudan
pad

 

Theradi veedhiyil .... kavithai romba nanna irundhathu Shri (Bhargavi)

Bhargavi enakku rom.......ba pidichcha peru
Aval ezhuthina kavithai subjecto caaru


Enna kavi paadinaalum maadhiri enna thread thudanginaalum
Bhargavikku kidaikuthu peyaru (fame)

Ennal appadiyellam ezhutha mudiyaathu paaru
Adhanaal merkkondu ethuvum ezhuthi seyyamaaten thavaru

Cant xpress how well u write Bhargavi
Kudos to you. All talented buddies here.

(Go yaar Nats. I tried to scribble something but cant write nicely like u man!!!)

 

ஹாய் ஸ்ரீனி!
நான் முதலில் ரெயில் என்று நினைத்தேன். ஆனால் ஆதுவும் ஓரு வாகனம் தானே? ரொம்ப அருமையாக இருந்தது உங்கள் கவிதை. நிஜமாக அவள் இல்லாமல் நான் இல்லை!
மஞ்சுளா

 

you very correctly write about the GENDER of the dhevathai.

because in tamil vehicles has come to the gender of agrinai.

but in hindi they give it's place in to the feminine gender .
so in your kavithai ,there is no gender mistake. 100% correct.

my student asked me this question ...how do you tell this [vehicle] as a feminine?, because more men only driving it.i said no more questions.you can understand it latterly.:drowning

 

yes my friend, i said it that way only.
i expect some mooooooreeeeee kavithai from you .
keep posting.