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குழந்தைகள் அற்ற உலகம் ..

Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by PavithraS, Mar 15, 2016.

  1. PavithraS

    PavithraS Platinum IL'ite

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    வண்ணங்களற்ற வானவில்லாகவா ?
    மழையற்ற மேகமாகவா ?
    இசைக்கசையா செவிகளாகவா ?
    வாசமற்ற மலர்களாகவா ?
    வெளிச்சமற்றப் பகலாகவா ?
    குளிர்சியற்ற இரவாகவா ?
    சிறகிழந்தப் பறவையாகவா ?
    உறவுகளற்றத் தனிமையாகவா ?
    கருணையற்ற இதயமாகவா ?
    வாஞ்சையற்ற வார்த்தைகளாகவா ?
    உரிமையற்ற அடிமைத்தனமாகவா ?
    நம்பிக்கையற்ற வாழ்கையாகவா ?

    எப்படி இருந்திருக்கும் குழந்தைகள் அற்றதான ஓர் உலகம் ?

    Regards,

    Pavithra
     
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  2. jskls

    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one Pavithra. Its hard to imagine something like that. Maybe couples who waited long enough to have children would exactly knew how such a world would be!
     
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  3. PavithraS

    PavithraS Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks @jskls ! What you have said is true.
     
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    Harini73 Platinum IL'ite

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    Beautiful one and yes it would be all those things above.It was a colorless and mechanical life without much joy till our daughter came after long years.

     
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    பவித்ரா குழந்தைகள் அற்ற உலகம் கோமாவில் இருப்பது போல் இருக்கும் .பொருள் செறிந்த கவிதை
     
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    uma1966 Platinum IL'ite

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    pavithra, kuzanthaigal illa ulagam kovil illa oorukku samam. superb kavithai .
     
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    @Harini73 Sumathy , thanks for sharing your feelings . I can understand. My best wishes for your daughter .

    @periamma , @uma1966 Thank you both for echoing my feelings.

    Regards,

    Pavithra
     
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