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  1. Oct 22, 2012 #1
    shiviz

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    அனைவருக்கும் வணக்கம் ..
    ஒரு பொய்யும்.. காதலும் என்னுடைய முதல் புதின முயற்சி.. உங்களுடைய மேலான கருத்துக்களை இங்கே பதிவு செய்யவும்
    நன்றி...
     
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  2. Oct 22, 2012 #2
    raji89

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    hi shiviz,
    first of all best wishes for ur new story :thumbsup..unga kadhai theme nalla interestingah irukku..aduthathu ennanu orey thrillah iruku..
    paavam shakthi ramoda poiyaala maatikittu enna avasthai pada poralo..ponnu paarka vara paiyan ramkku therinjavana iruppano..apram shakthiyoda athai 27 yrs kalichi marupadi re entry kudupangala.. aduthu enna sikkal varum.. ipdi yegapatta qns..waiting for nxt update..:)
     
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  3. Oct 23, 2012 #3
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    hi shiviz,

    nalla pogudhu story...
    ram and shakti dhan jodiya???? enna nadaka pogudhu??
     
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    shiviz

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    Thank u so much... raji... your words makes me to energise myself.. thanks...
     
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    Thank u sabari... soon will let you knw..:)
     
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    hi shiviz...
    BEST WISHES for this story ma...

    starting super ah irukku...
    ram solra poiyala enna nadakka pogudhu???
     
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    hi shivz.....

    all the best for ur story ......

    starting nalla iruku......
    ram yaru...?????
    sakthi pavam... ava life enna agum..??????

    athai paiyan than ram ah irukumo...??

    one suggestion... quotation mark use pannunga pls... then entha dialogue yaru pesaranga nu sollunga.....
    same line la without quotation mark...
    yaru enna pesaranga nu confuse aguthu ...... adhan sonnen.....

    then one more... comments ku than intha thread iruke.... story a ore thread la podalamla... continuity ku easy ah irukumnga....
    dont mistake me pls......
     
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    shiviz

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    Thank u so much... unga wishes eppothum venum ... :)
     
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    Hi accool
    First of all thank u so much for spending your valuble time on reading my story
    nothing to be taken as mistake..
    U r suggestions comments are more valuable..
    pls feel free to comment on anything about the story as these comments are the only way of improving my writing..

    Sorry.. intha post quotation illaama ready panniten.. :bowdownnext time kandippa unga advise follow panren.... :thumbsuppadikka kastapaduthunathukku very sorry.. :bowdown

    and neenga sonna maathiriye ore thread la third part potutten..:):thumbsup
    Once again Thank you so much for your valuable comment..
    Keep posting about the story..

    Thank you
     
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    hi shiviz

    thank u for considering my suggestion..........

    acho nan advise lam pannalanga....... unga sorry um vendam....... nan kashtam nu sollala konjama confusion adhan sonnen.....
     
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