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हम है पंची एक डाल की

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PushpavalliSrinivasan, Aug 14, 2008.

  1. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    हम पन्छी है एक डालकी
    बोली है हमारी भिन्न भिन्न
    है हम सब प्यार की डोरी से
    हम न्छी है एक डाल की!

    सभ्यता है हमारी बहुत पुरानी
    दियों से करते इस की पालन
    और करते रहेंगे युगांतर थक
    हम न्छी है एक डाल की!

    हम है भारत की नारियाँ अनोखि
    रहती है धुनियाँ की कोने कोने मे
    भेभाव तो नहीं हम मे
    हम न्छी है एक डाल की!

    Dear Ilites,
    This is my first contribution in Hindi. Please bear with me for spelling and grammatical mistakes, as I had lost touch with the language since a long time.
    Love,
    PS
     
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  2. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    A nice poem for the first attempt. It shows how enterprising you are even at this age.Keep writing more in Hindi too.
    Love
    Malathi
     
  3. maithreyi

    maithreyi Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Madam,
    Tomorrow is our Independence Day and you posted a very timely poem.

    Very nice poem.

    And here...hum sab Bharath ki naariyam ikkatte hokar, bina bedh bhav ki is forum mein har doosre ko haath batathe hain...

    We are all the children of Mother India.

    Happy Independence Day!!!
     
  4. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    Dear Malathi,
    Thanks for your encouragement and I feel elated to get appreciation from my beloved daughter.
    Love,
    PS
     
  5. PushpavalliSrinivasan

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    Dear Maithreyi,
    Thank you very much and "Hardhik Badhayiyam" to you and all our Ilites on the eve of Independance day! May GOD shower Peace, Prosperity and equality through out our country and all over the world! Jai Hind!
    With love,
    PS
     

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