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यहाँ प्यार ही प्यार है

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by iyerviji, Dec 21, 2008.

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  1. Dec 21, 2008 #1
    iyerviji

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    दिल से दिल मिलाके देखो
    मुज पर बरोसा करके देखो
    यहाँ सबको प्यार ही प्यार मिलेगा
    लौटेंगे नही कोई बिना प्यार के

    आओ सब मिलकर इस साईट को
    अपने प्यार बरे शब्दोसे सजादे
    कोई इस साईट से न लौटे बिना प्यार के
    यहाँ प्यार ही प्यार है

    viji
     
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  2. Dec 21, 2008 #2
    Riyasmommy

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    viji, found your poem :) Sounds really good.

    Just a little grammatical corrections, but other than that - very impressive and very well written! :clap

    idla sao idla imalaakxr doKaao
    mauJa par Baraosaa kxrkxo doKaao
    yaha^M sabakxao pyaar hI pyaar imalaogaa
    laaOTaogao nahIM ibanaa pyaar ko | ('lautoge' is one word, not sure why there are spaces in between the letters)

    AaAao saba imalakxr [sa saa[T kxao
    Apanao pyaar Baro SabdaoM sao sajaa doM
    kxao[- [sa saa[T sao na laaOTo ibanaa pyaar ko
    yaha^M pyaar hI pyaar hO |

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  3. Dec 21, 2008 #3
    Riyasmommy

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    I am trying the hindi font in a bigger size so it shows up better.

    idla sao idla imalaakxr doKaao
    mauJa par Baraosaa kxrkxo doKaao
    yaha^M sabakxao pyaar hI pyaar imalaogaa
    laaoOTaogao nahIM ibanaa pyaar ko |

    AaAao saba imalakxr [sa saa[T kxao
    Apanao pyaar Baro SabdaoM sao sajaa doM
    kxao[- [sa saa[T sao na laaOTo ibanaa pyaar ko
    yaha^M pyaar hI pyaar hO |
     
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  4. Dec 21, 2008 #4
    Riyasmommy

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    okay, that's a little too big... but more legible compared to the earlier one. :)

    Raj
     
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  5. Dec 21, 2008 #5
    iyerviji

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    Dear Raj

    Thanks for your first feedback. Good to know you liked it. I am not able to put the correct hindi word for some words.

    love
    viji


     
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  6. Dec 21, 2008 #6
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    Dear Viji,

    Bahut khub.Main manthi hoon ki yeh aisa site hain jahan pyar aur apnapan khub milega. Ek baar is site par aathe hi, duniya aur rangeen ho jaathi hain.

    Lovely,

    Regards,
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  7. Dec 21, 2008 #7
    iyerviji

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    Dear Devika

    Thank you dear for your feedback. Main be manthi hoo ki is site par aathe hi duniya aur rangeen ho jaathi hai aur yaha se janeka man nahi hotha hai.

    love
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    Sriniketan

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    Viji,
    Is kavitha, acchi hai..
    Brought out the essence of IL.

    sriniketan
     
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  9. Dec 22, 2008 #9
    Riyasmommy

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    You're welcom, viji. Keep writing, not everyone can come up with a poetry in a language that's not their first one! I know I can't :hide: (I am assuming Hindi is not your first language).

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  10. Dec 27, 2008 #10
    iyerviji

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    Dear Bhargavi

    Good to know you liked the kavitha and sorry for the delay in replying.
    Sometimes I am in my own world and forget to reply.

    love
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