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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, May 22, 2019.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    You asked me - ‘What I do to you?
    I do to you what you do to me.
    How can I explain all that I feel?
    I close my eyes and hear you speak…
    With my eyes closed I see you near me.
    For reasons unknown,
    Day and night I wonder when,
    The time would come for us to meet…
    I want all of you…
    I want to give all of me to you…
    Like the waves that touch the shore and go…
    I fall in love with you every minute,
    That seem to pass so slow…
    I talk to you and express myself…
    But there’s still so much more that I want to tell.
    Slow and sweet, tender and light,
    Moments with you are so precious much to my delight.
    Words fumble,
    I smile silly love smitten…
    I turn back the time and fall in love all over again...
    That moment when I walked in and our eyes locked…
    Knew you tied a string around my heart…
    I laugh thinking about it now…
    I laugh knowing I am happy and about.
     
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  2. Srama

    Srama Finest Post Winner

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    @Scorpio707

    Awww Meenu! How do you do this? Such a lovely poem. You have me tied with a string around my heart with your poetry ! I hope you are collecting all of them to publish sometime. Best wishes and love to you always, Meenu!

    PS: read the poem the day you posted and a couple of more times later!!! Loved it
     
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    Beautiful poem. I just adore this
     
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    Lovely one. had missed reading this ...
     
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    I thought I replied to you Sabitha, sorry it took me so long to realize :). Thank you for the encouraging words, it keeps me going :thumbsup:. The last time I counted it was over 200 poems :) and I have them all safe and secure with me.
     
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    Thank you.
     
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    Glad to hear that, thank you.
     
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    Thanks Laks, nice to hear from you. You’ve penned some really poems as well, I read them but forget to post a reply somehow. Hope your doing good.
     
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