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Unconditional Love!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rith, Feb 20, 2019.

  1. aarthi28

    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Rithu dear
    I feel the pain pa in your words. I can understand meera situation and you captured the emotions really well. Looking at a scene as a motion picture has its effect along with background music. It's easy to capture viewers mind. But when it happens while reading, there stands the writers talent and for sure u captured it well. Words left once are left. That's life.
    Luv u dear. That's a nice update.
     
  2. srilaxmi

    srilaxmi Silver IL'ite

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    (She wore the robe and mask and went inside.--------- Till you come back, I’ll wait without having even a drop of water” she kissed him on his forehead and left)

    The bonding and the love , friendship between husband and wife was well depicted, while reading the particular para, i had water in my eyes, well written rith. some people are borne with writing skill, u r one among them. the way u narrate the story will be different. The readers can easily visualize while reading.


    couldn't wait for the next one.
     
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    ratan Gold IL'ite

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    very well written. Prasanna loves and hates same girl at a time. Unique style of writing. :clap2:
     
  4. srilaxmi

    srilaxmi Silver IL'ite

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    rith waiting from morning doing log in & log off .
     
  5. Rith

    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you BB. They are yet to face more
     
  6. Rith

    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    If life is giving us tough times, it means flowers are going to bloom, something good is waiting for us. This is my experience. This is what I am trying to portray in this story. After all this tough time, how her life is going to change with bunch of happiness is the ultimatum of the story
     
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  7. Rith

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    Thank you Ma. Will be posting the next episode in a while
     
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    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks a lot Ratan. you have made my day :relaxed:
     
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    Rith IL Hall of Fame

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    I have no words to express my happiness Srilaxmi. Thank you so much for the support and encouragement. Hectic work at office nowadays, I couldn't login everyday. Posting the next episode in a while
     
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    Thank you so much Aarthi dear. Love you to the core. falling short of words to express my happiness. thank you for such an encouragement which motivates me to write more and more. Love you
     

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