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Ghost Story: You Killed Me

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Tamrakshar, Dec 26, 2018.

  1. Rith

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    You have nailed it. Such an awesome nail biting gripping story. Great work. Eagerly waiting for the next episode
     
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    It's OK to take more episodes.. Do it separately. So you can explain more about scenario making readers feel they are seeing/part of story.
     
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    Very interesting!
    You have maintained the suspense well..Unable to guess any
     
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    Welcome Rith! I am overwhelmed by your praise! Thanks!
     
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    Thanks Suma for your suggestion! I also tend to think in your line.
     
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    Thanks for your rave feedback! It feels great to know your interest in the story.
     
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    Waiting for the next episode... :icon_pc:
     
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    Suspense...felt like a thriller movie with last few episodes
     
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    Anaya, I sincerely relish your eagerness! But at the moment, I am at a critical juncture of inventing a new concept in theology. In case I decide to make a horror film out of it, and hoping nobody steals the plot before that, I have to make sure that the concept doesn't look absurd. So, give me some time to think. The next part will be published tomorrow 8 PM IST.
     
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    Welcome Ammusatheesh! Thanks for your kind remarks! The next part will be published tomorrow 8 PM IST.
     
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